Hi guys! I wrote this poem in 5 minutes! Hope you like it/can relate!

"Why"
Wish I could undo this
Wish I could undo my life.
Because I hate feeling like this all the time.
It's like I'm living in a body that isn't mine.
Trying to stop the pain, stop the tears.
But I keep drowning.
No, I don't need saving.
I need you to let go.
Because I'm barely hanging on to the end of this rope.
I'm tired of trying
Tired of fighting.
Tired of faking emotions, hoping I'll feel em.
When I know I never will.
Too much darkness,
The light is fading
I can't take anymore of this.
Don't even know why I exist.
You say the world is better with me in it
But I don't know why.
Because I'm nothing but a hazard to society.
No, I'll never understand.
Just why?

Question

Hi guys! I wrote this poem in 5 minutes! Hope you like it/can relate!

"Why"
Wish I could undo this
Wish I could undo my life.
Because I hate feeling like this all the time.
It's like I'm living in a body that isn't mine.
Trying to stop the pain, stop the tears.
But I keep drowning.
No, I don't need saving.
I need you to let go. 
Because I'm barely hanging on to the end of this rope.
I'm tired of trying
Tired of fighting.
Tired of faking emotions, hoping I'll feel em.
When I know I never will.
Too much darkness, 
The light is fading
I can't take anymore of this.
Don't even know why I exist.
You say the world is better with me in it
But I don't know why.
Because I'm nothing but a hazard to society.
No, I'll never understand.
Just why?

ddog · Answer

Good job keep up the good work 👍

axie · Answer

Next verse

Kxdusha · Answer

Pretty good poem keep it up, very relatable to a lot of ppl

FrogGirlEmmy · Answer

Okay but rap it. 🤞

ElexusQuimby · Answer

This is awesome. I can relate.  Great job.

Dolphan · Answer

This is wonderful, keep up the work!!

girlxssss · Answer

its very relate able

dgreer4 · Answer

@froggirlemmy wrote:

Okay but rap it. 🤞

Lol I don't rap but thxs✌️