Question

Are these some good lyrics for a song?
Verse 1:
I'm standing here on shaky ground, feeling lost, feeling down.
All the mistakes I've made, are tearing me apart, night and day.
But I won't let them define who I am, cause deep inside I know I can.
Rise above the wreckage, learn from my falls, defy the odds and conquer it all.

Chorus:
Mistakes, mistakes, they're part of who we are.
They teach us lessons; they leave a lasting scar.
But I won't let them hold me back, I'll seize the day and get back on track.
I'll find my way through the darkest night, learn from my mistakes, make everything right.

Verse 2:
Every stumble, every bad decision, only fuels my determination.
To turn my wrongs into something right, let my voice be heard, shine in the light.
Cause mistakes ain't forever, they're just stepping stones,
To something greater, where true brilliance is known.

Bridge:
I won't dwell on what's done, can't change the past,
But I'll use every lesson, to make my future last.
Every error, every twist and turn, leads me closer to what I yearn.
To be a stronger me, embracing my flaws,
Turning mistakes into applause.

Chorus:
Mistakes, mistakes, they're part of who we are.
They teach us lessons; they leave a lasting scar.
But I won't let them hold me back, I'll seize the day and get back on track.
I'll find my way through the darkest night, learn from my mistakes, make everything right.

Outro:
So, I'll embrace these flaws, wear them with pride,
Knowing mistakes are just signs that I've tried.
I'll keep growing, keep pushing through,
No matter the errors, I'll get to where I'm meant to.
No, I won't be defined by my past's shattered glass,
I'll rise, I'll shine, make every mistake my last.

Answer 1

Yes really good

Answer 2

It's a bit choppy, I did music prod for a bit and the lyrics are pretty good but the flow is just not consistent (not hate, legitimately feedback)