a poemish maby song i made

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lea0728 · Answer

stars
in the sky 
holding hands looking up at the night sky
not evin the booms of fireworks can distract me from your smile
the way you have no fears
it warms my heart
your hand is warm 
mine is cold
you warm it with the simpulest of tuch
when you smile its like the whole world stops
your like the light in the dark
gideing me in the right derection
i could wish for nothing more
cuz i see all of the stars 
but alls i need is the one
your brightest star in the sky
were holding hands looking up 
fireworks are are backround music
the cutest why when you cover your smile
playing with your hoodie strings 
you have no fears for this world
you warm my hand when it gets cold
your the light of dawn after a long night
ur the slight patter of rain on my window 
brighter than all of the stars combind 
cuz you light up the night sky 
when were holding hands
waching fireworks 
evin tho i my eyes wont leave your smile.
you are the stars 
in the sky

lea0728 · Answer

@karissafrazier @jungkook69 @stanateez @havenwuvly

lea0728 · Answer

@c71vl :]

Midnight97 · Answer

Wow this is lovely, good  job keep it  up!!

lea0728 · Answer

@midnight97 wrote:

Wow this is lovely, good job keep it up!!

ty ty its about a recent event (hinting at the fireworks lol) i think i did good on it lots of spelling errors but oh well

JustBeNice · Answer

Awe I love this! It’s so sweet:)

lea0728 · Answer

@justbenice wrote:

Awe I love this! It’s so sweet:)

:]

stanateez · Answer

it’s beautiful!

lea0728 · Answer

@stanateez wrote:

it’s beautiful!

ty ty

euphoriiic · Answer

i love it, it's so beautiful 🤍

lea0728 · Answer

@euphoriiic wrote:

i love it, it's so beautiful 🤍

ty

jamesjack · Answer

🤩

Dolphan · Answer

I love this, its beautiful, but there are some spelling errors other than that, amazing job!! 🤍🤍

lea0728 · Answer

@dolphan wrote:

I love this, its beautiful, but there are some spelling errors other than that, amazing job!! 🤍🤍

yeah i suck lol