Here is one of my favorites pieces I wrote!!

Feelings down

I feel as if I could cry an ocean. I don't know whether or not its because I miss you. Or if I miss what we have had. Or if I want to cry because I feel like boxes are being stacked on top of me and I am falling closer to the ground. I miss you, I miss our smiles, I miss your hugs and your constant reassurance. you would give to me. I miss knowing your their, and I can talk to you if I need too. I want to play every sad song of on repeat, and cry until I cant anymore. I could sit at the bottom of the shower for hours thinking about me and you while I listen to the sound of billie elish and daniel ceaser while they sing songs about relationships and love. The two things I don't have right now. I want to see you again. feel your warm hand and fingers interlaced with mine everywhere we go. Feel you hold me close when we are in public so other people knew I was yours. You cherished me, you showed me off, you loved having me to yourself, and you woke up one day deciding you don't want that anymore.

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Here is one of my favorites pieces I wrote!!
 
Feelings down

I feel as if I could cry an ocean. I don't know whether or not its because I miss you. Or if I miss what we have had. Or if I want to cry because I feel like boxes are being stacked on top of me and I am falling closer to the ground. I miss you, I miss our smiles, I miss your hugs and your constant reassurance. you would give to me. I miss knowing your their, and I can talk to you if I need too. I want to play every sad song of on repeat, and cry until I cant anymore. I could sit at the bottom of the shower for hours thinking about me and you while I listen to the sound of billie elish and daniel ceaser while they sing songs about relationships and love. The two things I don't have right now. I want to see you again. feel your warm hand and fingers interlaced with mine everywhere we go. Feel you hold me close when we are in public so other people knew I was yours. You cherished me, you showed me off, you loved having me to yourself, and you woke up one day deciding you don't want that anymore.

Krissy525 · Answer

Awwww, I felt this

Dolphan · Answer

Please give your honest opinion (:

SaltTheLoser · Answer

Garbage

idontexistrn · Answer

@krissy525 wrote:

Awwww, I felt this

same

Midnight97 · Answer

Felt this and it is beautiful work keep it  up

TigerHorse · Answer

@salttheloser wrote:

Garbage

you are mean

TigerHorse · Answer

I felt it, so good, keep up the great work!

Dolphan · Answer

Thank you all.

SaltTheLoser · Answer

@tigerhorse wrote:

@salttheloser wrote:

Garbage

you are mean

Shut up

Midnight97 · Answer

@salttheloser wrote:

@tigerhorse wrote:

@salttheloser wrote:

Garbage

you are mean

Shut up

wow where is the nice guy in you what happened?

SaltTheLoser · Answer

@midnight97 wrote:

@salttheloser wrote:

@tigerhorse wrote:

@salttheloser wrote:

Garbage

you are mean

Shut up

wow where is the nice guy in you what happened?

🤓

Midnight97 · Answer

... Okay?

scarlettmiris · Answer

it's amazing, I can relate too

euphoriiic · Answer

🤍

jamesjack · Answer

@salttheloser wrote:

Garbage

if you cant appreciate tlent then dont sy anything

jamesjack · Answer

@tigerhorse wrote:

@salttheloser wrote:

Garbage

you are mean

@tigerhorse wrote:

I felt it, so good, keep up the great work!

yasssss

jamesjack · Answer

gret work keep it uup

SaltTheLoser · Answer

Ok but have you considered killing yourself

jamesjack · Answer

@salttheloser wrote:

Ok but have you considered killing yourself

thats totally uncalled for

SaltTheLoser · Answer

🤓

SaltTheLoser · Answer

Did I ask

Crazygirl1 · Answer

@salttheloser wrote:

Garbage

That's rude

Crazygirl1 · Answer

Also, I LOVE this. It's amazing. And it describes how a lot of people, including me, feel. Great job! 😃

SaltTheLoser · Answer

@crazygirl1 wrote:

@salttheloser wrote:

Garbage

That's rude

🤓👆

lowkey · Answer

Bro wrote the most stereotypical 'heartbreak' paragraph and called it his favorite

K1NGofPadlet · Answer

@scarlettmiris wrote:

it's amazing, I can relate too

How can you relate though? I didn't know you had an ex you miss. 🤔

scarlettmiris · Answer

@k1ngofpadlet wrote:

@scarlettmiris wrote:

it's amazing, I can relate too

How can you relate though? I didn't know you had an ex you miss. 🤔

it was actually like someone i wasn't even in a relationship with like it's ridiculous