Question

In shadows deep, where hope does wane,
I find myself, consumed by pain.
The weight of burdens, too much to bear,
The whispers echo, no one will care.

But in this darkness, a flicker may glow,
A spark of strength, I've yet to know.
For giving up is not the end,
It's a chance to mend, to transcend.

Though storms may rage, and tears may fall,
Within surrender, we find the call.
To rise anew, with courage high,
And face the challenges, with a battle cry.

For in the depths of darkest night,
A glimmer of hope can still ignite.
So let us not give up, but strive,
To find the light, and truly thrive.

Remember, dear heart, you're not alone,
Reach out, seek solace, let love be shown.
For giving up may seem the way,
But there's strength within you, come what may.

Answer 1

Salt, this is a beautiful poem. I felt this poem and I enjoyed reading this. I love the line(s)
"Remember, dear heart, you're not alone,
Reach out, seek solace, let love be shown.
For giving up may seem the way,
But there's strength within you, come what may."

Overall, great job on writing this. You have a special talent of writing poems. Never give up!!

Answer 2

Nice

Answer 3

lovelyyy

Answer 4

You did so good salt. This poem really is amazing. Your talent is beyond cool

Answer 5

Always knew you had it in ya, Salt. Way to go.

Answer 6

Keep it up Saltine

Answer 7

Ur doin great

Answer 8

Callate

Answer 9

Si papa