Question

Just wrote a song, comment however u like (btw it's not done yet)

the story behind the song is about two people and me(my ex bf, and my mom) about how we would fight a lot, and then they would act different with other people and the things that's I would do to myself.

Song Name: Broken Feeling or Two Faced

You said no deal breakers
But how you act says different

You said nothing would change
But its not the same

Treat me like a disease
Always throwin' shade
Always telling me you love me
Lyin' to my face

Trying to hide the hate towards me
Thinkin I can't tell
But damn, you never really hid it well

Lying, cheating, screaming, bleeding
Hearts broke while we crush this feeling

Maybe it's better this way
You wouldn't go back change

Both/Always} crying and cuttin'
For no reason, 'cause we got this broken feeling

Maybe it's better this way
You wouldn't go back and change

Yelling at everything I do
Never really liked being around you
Always acted different in front of people
Made me think something was wrong with you

Almost committed to being your daughter/girl
Then you showed me the real you
Always putting walls up, so I'd never disappoint you

Lying. cheating, screaming, bleeding
Hearts broke while we crush this feeling

Maybe it's better this way
You wouldn't go back and change

Both/Always} crying and cutting (myself)
'cause we got this broken feeling

Maybe it's better this way
You wouldn't go back and change

Oh, bridges burning
Relationships ruined
All because we didn't really work through it
I knew I would change
But i don't think you will
All I know is, I would love to change it with you

(Lying, cheating, screaming, bleeding...) x2

(I hate my life)

Answer 1

Nice

Answer 2

nice