Question

Poems in 10 minutes

The tears fell no more
When my eyes fell upon the shore
of your heart
Now we roam
Oh the places we shall go
when we reach the near and far shore
Now we can be sure
we go together like paper and glue

Answer 1

🫶It's amazing keep it up

Answer 2

Ty so much!

Answer 3

Wow-! This is amazing it's simple, yet it's emotional. It has a mystery behind it and it has a story. I love it keep it up!

Answer 4

Ofc! And no need to give me the medal, I was just stating what I got from your poem.

Answer 5

Still good, if this goes well imma do one everyday if i can.

Answer 6

That's awesome!

Answer 7

mhm

Answer 8

I have a question. This is one that helped me find the focus of my poems.

Answer 9

I have come to notice that you do not have a title for your poems. Why may that be?

Answer 10

for my other poem i made i had a title, but i made this one in ten minutes so i forgot xD

Answer 11

Oh! Okay, that makes more sense. Please excuse my meddling.

Answer 12

its fine

Answer 13

You are an amazing writer don't let anyone tell you differently. But remember to always take advice if it is given. If it does not work out for you then it's not meant for you. That goes for you too @misslatina

Answer 14

Ofc. If you need me just tag me. Have a nice day!