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Renne:

"Pain and Love" By Renne and @R3B3LMARINE ( @R3B3LMARINE part) If you could see the real me you would see a demon If you walked through the door you would hear me roar because I am in pain. I try to keep out the good side of me, but it keeps dying. If you walk through the door and see I got a shotgun to my head, its cause I can't have you. The demon inside trys to come out. but the angel doesn't want to hide So, if you see me dead its cause I cant have you. you you you you. I cant have you. ( @Renne part) But I have love in my heart and Love is the answer to it all I will forever and always love you for you have made a mark on my life and my heart. We may not be soulmates but we will always be friends and that I will never forget. I have had an angel in my life as a love and as a friend, and for that you will never be forgotten.

Renne:

This was originally Marine's words I was asked to finish it. Please tell us what you think.

R3B3LMARINE:

@dolphan @mrmystery

R3B3LMARINE:

@cupidsdemise

Dolphan:

Danny, this is beautiful. Amazing job, both of you.

Renne:

Thank you

Renne:

@oliver69 @dolphan @p1n3appl31

OLIVER69:

I'm utterly speechless and yet again this was so incredibly true. Especially two parts. This part, "I can't have you." I know that all too well. In love with some you can have sucks. And the second part, 'I love you for you'. That couldn't be anymore true, loving someone you can't have hurts, but you know you will always love them. Keep up the good work you two!

Renne:

Thank brother!^^

R3B3LMARINE:

Thank you, Oliver! That means a lot to me! I have held on to this song for 7 years. Made it when I was 10. I had my first heart break then, and it ended up being the worst of them all.

cupidsdemise:

Beautiful

Renne:

Thank you

MissLatina:

Truly amazing

R3B3LMARINE:

@misslatina wrote:
Truly amazing
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P1n3appl31:

Nice job Danny and Sobrina! Really felt that one in an extremely relatable way.

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