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bryanna2006:

my song about love..

SmoothCriminal:

Love is a popular item these days.

bryanna2006:

I was hurt till you lifted me up and that you said u would keep me through everything I that I have been through you saved me for my life your my one and only they thing is I'm scared that I'm lose you and that you hate me and it hurts I swear in this world.i said I would never fall in love again but I found you..

bryanna2006:

tell me if I should keep going

SmoothCriminal:

@bryanna2006 wrote:
I was hurt till you lifted me up and that you said u would keep me through everything I that I have been through you saved me for my life your my one and only they thing is I'm scared that I'm lose you and that you hate me and it hurts I swear in this world.i said I would never fall in love again but I found you..
It seems less like a song and more like a note, ngl.

bryanna2006:

ist also because I haven't made a beat for it yet

SmoothCriminal:

@bryanna2006 wrote:
ist also because I haven't made a beat for it yet
That's fine. Just constructive criticism is all.

bryanna2006:

me with my new kitten!

BubbleGum4:

Soo cute!

bryanna2006:

thanks

BubbleGum4:

Ofcc

bryanna2006:

idk my face is just nah

BubbleGum4:

We have the same nose lol

BubbleGum4:

I get insecure about it sum

BubbleGum4:

But u look pretty!!

idfkaa:

this not even bout yo song no mo 😂

bryanna2006:

lol sorry yall

idfkaa:

ay but the song it has a good start to it ngl

bryanna2006:

thanks!

SmoothCriminal:

You look like Billie Eilish ngl

bryanna2006:

I get that alot

SmoothCriminal:

@bryanna2006 wrote:
I get that alot
Calling you Billie Eilish now.

bryanna2006:

ight

Wankle1222:

word

Fortish:

Yes, keep at it!

bryanna2006:

im almost done with my song<3

bryanna2006:

do i really look like billie elish tho?

Flowerpower5290:

Sorry about that

Flowerpower5290:

@bryanna2006 wrote:
tell me if I should keep going
Yes

5StarFab:

Is your song finished?

euphoriiic:

coolio

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