Question

This is a rap i made about deku let me know what you think.

Name is Deku don't mess with or i'm coming you and going to make you go bye and that's no lie.You come at me with your gang got a quirk and it's a perk and i call it bang bang.it's fling and i got the brand new diamond ring.My power is at the max and i spitting these crazy facts .You got a chain Pear i'm about to blow this to your brain don't give a Pear if i'm insane.Got the power to make some mist and flick you away with my wrist.It's a click another kick to your face better keep up with the pace of me you will always be the enemy. your ordinary nothing extraordinary.You are not like me i be scheming and you be just dreaming.Got the beam to make you scream. Better keep your pace because i'm faster then the Pearing space.It's clear your full of fear but nobody is even near to hear.You hear that crunch i just broke your bone with my punch,I don't slack i'm known to pack.i'm no average you already know i'm Pearing savage.It's tragic you think i'm all magic.Me and you are never going to tie and that's no lie.When we get into a fight i will put you out for the night.You know i'm right i'm already stronger then all might







(I didn't use "GD" for this ,so no link will be posted)

Answer 1

nice

Answer 2

If you guys want the uncensored version let me know.

Answer 3

YESSS

Answer 4

okay i got to get into a google doc real quick brb.

Answer 5

I like how it rhymes. This is good and seems to have good action to it.

Answer 6

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1O3ZHb5zKBVlaXvEBkY0Sf5D5-_5vgVMX2vftjQKS908/edit?usp=sharing

Answer 7

i need uncensored