https://docs.google.com/document/d/1p6a9hBGWbDRY0YF9f7ROoLnmVnEzdWVE7-rAmFFEbEk/edit

Any ideas of what i should add to do it make it more entertaining ?

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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1p6a9hBGWbDRY0YF9f7ROoLnmVnEzdWVE7-rAmFFEbEk/edit

Any ideas of what i should add to do it make it more entertaining ?

5StarFab · Answer

The do was a typo,my apologizes for that.

BubbleGum4 · Answer

First of all good job! Second of all this is really great! And I personally don't think u should add anything else!!

lilbart · Answer

Damn thats a lot!
Great determination!!

JasmineOfficial · Answer

👍

5StarFab · Answer

@bubblegum4 wrote:

First of all good job! Second of all this is really great! And I personally don't think u should add anything else!!

I'm going to write it to where they get off the island but are still being hunted.Or should i keep it to where there on the island and don't find the ship.