Question

This is a new story i been writing.(Started it like five minutes ago) Let me know what you guys think.

Fabian heard a knock at the door.Fabian opened the door to see people were bleeding and one of them was screaming “There coming run” Fabian walked over to the person who was yelling and started talking “What do you mean?” The person looked at Fabian.And Fabian noticed the person as looking at something.Fabian looked behind him.To see a scary looking creature and fabian backed up.And Fabian then started to run and he then saw more creatures looking at him.Fabian freaked out and lost control and started screaming “What the Apple are you guys”The creatures smiled and looked at fabian with a wicked maniac smile said “Were demon’s who came here to end all of humanity”.Fabian eyes bulged.Fabian was speechless but fabian slowly started talking and started talking in a worried tone “What…” The demons laughed and said “Better run you filthy mortal” Fabian looked at them then started running.Fabian jumped and rolled into an alley.And found some metal poles and other metal like weapons.Fabian then heard some rustling around in dark.Fabian was scared then saw someone get tossed past him.The person said “Run… Fabian..” And Fabian then realized the person who just got tossed and passed away was his brother.Fabian got scared then he started getting furious.Fabian then started running into the dark and something jumped at him Fabian then grabbed te metal pole and jumped up and hit what ever it was in the face and it fell to the ground.Fabian then saw it was a demon.And then looked At Fabian and said “If i can’t live neither can you” The demon shot Fabian with his all power.But for some strange reason.Fabian’s body was absorbing all the power and he was getting stronger then he ever was.Fabian felt the power coursing through his veins