hi i have a English Speech i need to do and stand up next week in front of me class and present it my Speech is about camping this is what i have so far Have you ever went off in the woods with your family or friends taking pictures of Mother Nature and admire the Wild animals that live among the wood Well thats me when i was just a little girl i started Camping learning everything about the wonderful wildlife seeing what i had to see even taking picture of the wild animals we seen Every Summer we would pack our bags get off phones TVs and even laptop and spend about 1 week without Electronics outdoor in the Wild Life every Year all of my family comes with Us my Uncles and Aunts my Nana and Papa my Dad my sister and Cousins we all are all about the Great outdoors and really admire the Wildlife so why be on your phones all dang day doing nothing but send Snaps and pictures of yourself why cant you be like my family and join Mother Nature who knows what she has for you why can’t you be like us and head on down in the Woods and get a Tent ready to go or even a Camper start a Fire but don’t forget to brings marshmallows for smores and maybe hotdogs to roast as well being in the World of mother nature as a lot of things u can do like Ride 4 wheelers motor cycle’s and you can even Go hiking and look around mother nature you could even take your boat and go Boating on the lakes or even go Fishing but if you Do go Camping Make sure to bring a Camera or something and make some good Memory or even good times

Any tips or advice or any thing i should add

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hi i have a English Speech i need to do and stand up next week in front of me class and present it my Speech is about camping this is what i have so far Have you ever went off in the woods with your family or friends taking pictures of Mother Nature and admire the Wild animals that live among the wood Well thats me when i was just a little girl i started Camping learning everything about the wonderful wildlife seeing what i had to see even taking picture of the wild animals we seen Every Summer we would pack our bags get off phones TVs and even laptop and spend about 1 week without Electronics outdoor in the Wild Life every Year all of my family comes with Us my Uncles and Aunts my Nana and Papa my Dad my sister and Cousins we all are all about the Great outdoors and really admire the Wildlife so why be on your phones all dang day doing nothing but send Snaps and pictures of yourself why cant you be like my family and join Mother Nature who knows what she has for you  why can’t you be like us and head on down in the Woods and get a Tent ready to go or even a Camper start a Fire but don’t forget to brings marshmallows for smores and maybe hotdogs to roast as well being in the World of mother nature as a lot of things u can do like Ride 4 wheelers motor cycle’s and you can even Go hiking and look around mother nature   you could even take your boat and go Boating on the lakes or even go Fishing but if you Do go Camping Make sure to bring a Camera or something and make some good Memory or even good times

Any tips or advice or any thing i should add

Arizona · Answer

@bubblegum4  @renne  @oliver69  @elexusquimby x

BubbleGum4 · Answer

I can see that you put a lot of effort in your writing! and i dont think you should add anything else! unless you have to add another paragraph! p: 
Make sure to bring a Camera  and make some good Memory's or even good times "

Arizona · Answer

@bubblegum4 wrote:

I can see that you put a lot of effort in your writing! and i dont think you should add anything else! unless you have to add another paragraph! p: Make sure to bring a Camera and make some good Memory's or even good times "

thanks this is suppose to be 10 sentence or more

BubbleGum4 · Answer

"And also make sure to make good memory's"* p:

BubbleGum4 · Answer

@arizona wrote:

@bubblegum4 wrote:

I can see that you put a lot of effort in your writing! and i dont think you should add anything else! unless you have to add another paragraph! p: Make sure to bring a Camera and make some good Memory's or even good times "

thanks this is suppose to be 10 sentence or more

Oh! in that case,Great job! p:

ElexusQuimby · Answer

I love this great job on it.

BubbleGum4 · Answer

@bubblegum4 wrote:

"And also make sure to make good memory's"* p:

And also remember to make good memory's*

Fortish · Answer

Love it, keep it up!