A rap i made

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A rap i made

5StarFab · Answer

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5StarFab · Answer

it  starts 21 seconds into it.

5StarFab · Answer

22 but go at 21.

starla · Answer

It's nice

starla · Answer

That was really cool

pennalopee · Answer

You did a good job keep up the good work

keys · Answer

I personally disliked it, needs a lot of improvement

itzmeee · Answer

@keys wrote:

I personally disliked it, needs a lot of improvement

what are u talkin abt bru. hes recording w out autotune n voice filter and shi and it sounds like this img what he could do if he used autotune

keys · Answer

@itzmeee wrote:

@keys wrote:

I personally disliked it, needs a lot of improvement

what are u talkin abt bru. hes recording w out autotune n voice filter and shi and it sounds like this img what he could do if he used autotune

Well, his lyrics aren't very original or thoughtful, the sound quality was below average, voice control was untamed. No metaphors or figurative language, flow was not very good because he couldn't rap on beat & he was constantly switching his rhymes instead of using the same word to rhyme off of. Just wasn't my type of rap, but if you like this with auto tune & voice filters then I respect your opinion, personally he doesn't sound like he needs autotune, just more practice, improvement

LILBOY · Answer

i aint finna lie dis sht ahh  u nned hella work goo listen to my song and u can hear my words and it sound like u not talkin sounds like u makin sounds ngl

LILBOY · Answer

https://www.bandlab.com/post/84d53c54-cc54-ee11-9937-000d3a41ec2a

Marcus123321 · Answer

Bros not making it out the hood💀

nilahisthebest · Answer

@marcus123321 wrote:

Bros not making it out the hood💀

no fr no shade buhh full shade

LILBOY · Answer

lmao his ahh staying inn da hood neva make another song g

nilahisthebest · Answer

@lilboy wrote:

lmao his ahh staying inn da hood neva make another song g

yu goin to hell

LILBOY · Answer

lmao

nilahisthebest · Answer

@lilboy wrote:

yall all goin to hell lmao he might make it out the house or the block buhh not the hood

LILBOY · Answer

@nilahisthebest wrote:

@lilboy wrote:

yall all goin to hell lmao he might make it out the house or the block buhh not the hood

not evven out da house my ngga actually not out da bed

nilahisthebest · Answer

@lilboy wrote:

@nilahisthebest wrote:

@lilboy wrote:

yall all goin to hell lmao he might make it out the house or the block buhh not the hood

not evven out da house my ngga actually not out da bed

what the Hell Boii lmao is he even black fr

LILBOY · Answer

noo

LILBOY · Answer

@nilahisthebest wrote:

@lilboy wrote:

@nilahisthebest wrote:

@lilboy wrote:

yall all goin to hell lmao he might make it out the house or the block buhh not the hood

not evven out da house my ngga actually not out da bed

what the Hell Boii lmao is he even black fr

noo

nilahisthebest · Answer

@lilboy wrote:

@nilahisthebest wrote:

Anf he said ni.gga w.th is wrong w/ him broskii needs help fr

@lilboy wrote:

@nilahisthebest wrote:

@lilboy wrote:

yall all goin to hell lmao he might make it out the house or the block buhh not the hood

not evven out da house my ngga actually not out da bed

what the Hell Boii lmao is he even black fr

noo

5StarFab · Answer

Damn,the disrespect is crazy.

5StarFab · Answer

@pennalopee wrote:

You did a good job keep up the good work

yeah.

nilahisthebest · Answer

@5starfab wrote:

Damn,the disrespect is crazy.

mb buhh its true

5StarFab · Answer

@nilahisthebest wrote:

@5starfab wrote:

Damn,the disrespect is crazy.

mb buhh its true

😐

keys · Answer

@5starfab wrote:

@nilahisthebest wrote:

@5starfab wrote:

Damn,the disrespect is crazy.

mb buhh its true

😐

For a start, make your words more understandable, like reading a book

5StarFab · Answer

@keys wrote:

@5starfab wrote:

@nilahisthebest wrote:

@5starfab wrote:

Damn,the disrespect is crazy.

mb buhh its true

😐

For a start, make your words more understandable, like reading a book

I read many it's my voice.I have a speaking disability. So i talk weird.

Marcus123321 · Answer

@5starfab wrote:

@keys wrote:

💀 rapper career not looking to bright

@5starfab wrote:

@nilahisthebest wrote:

@5starfab wrote:

Damn,the disrespect is crazy.

mb buhh its true

😐

For a start, make your words more understandable, like reading a book

I read many it's my voice.I have a speaking disability. So i talk weird.

Marcus123321 · Answer

💀 rapper career not looking to bright

5StarFab · Answer

@marcus123321 wrote:

💀 rapper career not looking to bright

To you guys.

5StarFab · Answer

your opinions don't matter to me.

Marcus123321 · Answer

i love our confidence keep up the  "good" work

Marcus123321 · Answer

if they dont matter also why did you how it to us

Marcus123321 · Answer

sounds like a Baltimore rapper "tugalugen"💀
its alright tho just keep trying

5StarFab · Answer

@marcus123321 wrote:

💀 rapper career not looking to bright

Even if my rapper career fails i can just be a writer or make anime edits for big businesses

Marcus123321 · Answer

it jus keeps getting worse 💀

5StarFab · Answer

@marcus123321 wrote:

it jus keeps getting worse 💀

that's what you think.But you don't know.

5StarFab · Answer

i been writing stories and i been a writer or an anime designer.But the fact you think it's getting worse is crazy you barely even know me the only thing you know is that i made a rap.

5StarFab · Answer

@marcus123321 wrote:

if they dont matter also why did you how it to us

Cause i did? i was talking about the negative criticism.

5StarFab · Answer

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luhivqqcherry · Answer

LMAOAOAOAAOAOAOOAA

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