Question

Hello! I'm working on a song. And I need some constructive criticism on it. I wanna see if it's any good or not. Please be honest! And the song isn't finished, also it is very depressing, in my opinion.

"Hey, how's life?,
I smile, I'm fine,
Just being over dramatic,
That's fine,
Everything's fine,
You're right.
I think I just need some time,
You know,
take a break from real life.
Just take some breaths,
and let it all out.
Pack up my stuff,
and bury it all down.
Just like my emotions,
let them all down.
You know what I gotta go through everyday,
emotions flowing over me,
like a tidal wave.
Dealing with sh-- everyday,
getting sh-- faced like always."

That is all I have so far

Answer 1

That's good keep it up.

Answer 2

I like that!

Answer 3

Its really good!