Question

"when it rains"


I love when it rains...so my tears are covered by the drops that trickle down my face...when I scream it's more of a squeak...I am never heard...they will only listen when I can no longer give warning...they will stand over my grave and wish I were with them and not there...when my grave is in the ground..will anyone cry or call out? Or will they move and celebrate like any other day..oh the storm comes when it rains.

Answer 1

Is there any way I can improve this?

Answer 2

idk. looks good to me.
pretty deep actually-

Answer 3

Hm Thank you

Answer 4

Man when it rains 🥰

Answer 5

Thats deep, you good?

Answer 6

Mhm-

Answer 7

dam fr that is why i cry when it rains no sound is piece to me ps i love to cry in the rain bye

Answer 8

Ew

Answer 9

Bro don't say ew to the person.at least she or he gave it there best shot.

Answer 10

I like it. I wish there was more I could read though.

Answer 11

I like it

Answer 12

Nice

Answer 13

Noice

Answer 14

its great i dont have anything that needs changing, hope you have a nice day :>>

Answer 15

coolio