This is my song (Written right now) i call it Go back in time.

If i can go go back in time change this to world with out you.Cause i can't even stand you.Cause you been denying the fact you stabbed me in the damn back.Your not my friend just someone i'm leaving you on read.don't expect me to be your friend.Your just a parasite living in my head.Making me see red.You stabbed me in the back.You know that for damn fact.You acted like a friend but secretly you wanted me dead.

Done how is it?

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This is my song (Written right now)  i call it Go back in time.

If i can go go back in time change this to world with out you.Cause i can't even stand you.Cause you been denying the fact you stabbed me in the damn back.Your not my friend just someone i'm leaving you on read.don't expect me to be your friend.Your just a parasite living in my head.Making me see red.You stabbed me in the back.You know that for damn fact.You acted like a friend but secretly you wanted me dead.

Done how is it?

bryanferia · Answer

I think it is great may need a few improvements here and there but don't worry you are doing great and you are on the right track

ctomk3743 · Answer

If I'm being honest This is fire bro congrats 🎉

5StarFab · Answer

@ctomk3743 wrote:

If I'm being honest This is fire bro congrats 🎉

Thanks.