Question

Poem


I look at the clouds
and the evergreen trees,
And I realize how good God is to me.
He created this world
Just as I am excited about the heavens, the streets of gold and pearl.
I can't wait to go to Heaven
And I thank the Lord that I am forgiven.

Answer 1

slay

Answer 2

Beautiful

Answer 3

I love it. But maybe it should have a little more added onto it. Like keep it going.

Answer 4

its really good i could never write a poem that beautiful

Answer 5

I like it

Answer 6

I love fact that, this isn't sad or depressing like most poems on here. Amazing job!! Never give up on the writing!!

Answer 7

Yay, thank you all and God bless!

Answer 8

Absolutely amazing! ✨

Answer 9

Nice poem!

Answer 10

It's really good. It shows how thankful you are for being able to live on a beautiful planet and how you are thankful to be given life. It's truly a wonderful poem and I would love to see more added to this poem to though. |^_^|

Answer 11

WW poem

Answer 12

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Answer 13

coolio