A new song i been writing called "Torn apart" .

You made me pour out my heart then you ripped it apart you were lying to me about everything.Your just another fake and my biggest mistake.You tore me apart when you broke my heart.

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A new song i been writing called "Torn apart" .

You made me pour out my heart then you ripped it apart you were lying to me about everything.Your just another fake and my biggest mistake.You tore me apart when you broke my heart.

Dolphan · Answer

This is beautiful. Great job!! I can feel the pain in it.

1luvurmom · Answer

Beautiful🤩

5StarFab · Answer

Full song

You made me pour out my heart then you ripped it apart you were lying to me about everything.Your just another fake and my biggest mistake.You tore me apart when you broke my heart.You torn me apart you left me in the dark and there went our spark.I was left alone i was out my of zone.I was alone with the thoughts in my head all they said was i'm better off dead.And i keep seeing red and i got to take these useless meds

HadesFavedaughter · Answer

damn....so true

velmalovesshaggy145 · Answer

Could be the pre chorus

velmalovesshaggy145 · Answer

Try building off details about the relationship I would tie it together with a piano but guitar is also good @5starfab

5StarFab · Answer

@velmalovesshaggy145 wrote:

Try building off details about the relationship I would tie it together with a piano but guitar is also good @5starfab

okay.