Question

Feedback for poem

In the realm of pixels and words,

We forged a bond, unique and absurd.

But amidst the chaos of life's demands,

I lost sight of your gentle hands.

Please understand,

That it was never my intention to abandon.

For in the depths of my heart, you lie,

A spark that ignites the darkest sky.

So forgive me, my dear, for my negligence,

And allow me to make amends hence.

I promise to prioritize our connection,

And ensure your absence becomes a mere reflection.

Answer 1

This platform is used for all the wrong reasons.

Answer 2

All i need is simple feedback

Answer 3

its good

Answer 4

@savannar any feedback

Answer 5

as long as you write from your mind and keep writing then you will be good cause your writing is good just fix the platform