If i can go go back in time change this to world with out you.Cause i can't even stand you.Cause you been denying the fact you stabbed me in the damn back.Your not my friend just someone i'm leaving you on read.don't expect me to be your friend.Your just a parasite living in my head.Making me see red.You stabbed me in the back.You know that for damn fact.You acted like a friend but secretly you wanted me dead.You made me pour out my heart then you ripped it apart you were lying to me about everything.Your just another fake and my biggest mistake.You tore me apart when you broke my heart.

As you guys can see i combined two songs i wrote together let me know what you think.

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If i can go go back in time change this to world with out you.Cause i can't even stand you.Cause you been denying the fact you stabbed me in the damn back.Your not my friend just someone i'm leaving you on read.don't expect me to be your friend.Your just a parasite living in my head.Making me see red.You stabbed me in the back.You know that for damn fact.You acted like a friend but secretly you wanted me dead.You made me pour out my heart then you ripped it apart you were lying to me about everything.Your just another fake and my biggest mistake.You tore me apart when you broke my heart.

As you guys can see i combined two songs i wrote together let me know what you think.

5StarFab · Answer

If i can go go back in time change this to world with out you.Cause i can't even stand you.Cause you been denying the fact you stabbed me in the damn back.Your not my friend just someone i'm leaving you on read.don't expect me to be your friend.Your just a parasite living in my head.Making me see red.You stabbed me in the back.You know that for damn fact.You acted like a friend but secretly you wanted me dead.You made me pour out my heart then you ripped it apart you were lying to me about everything.Your just another fake and my biggest mistake.You tore me apart when you broke my heart.You torn me apart you left me in the dark and there went our spark.I was left alone i was out my of zone.I was alone with the thoughts in my head all they said was i'm better off dead.And i keep seeing red and i got to take these useless meds

5StarFab · Answer

Here is the full song

@5starfab wrote:

If i can go go back in time change this to world with out you.Cause i can't even stand you.Cause you been denying the fact you stabbed me in the damn back.Your not my friend just someone i'm leaving you on read.don't expect me to be your friend.Your just a parasite living in my head.Making me see red.You stabbed me in the back.You know that for damn fact.You acted like a friend but secretly you wanted me dead.You made me pour out my heart then you ripped it apart you were lying to me about everything.Your just another fake and my biggest mistake.You tore me apart when you broke my heart.You torn me apart you left me in the dark and there went our spark.I was left alone i was out my of zone.I was alone with the thoughts in my head all they said was i'm better off dead.And i keep seeing red and i got to take these useless meds

Fortish · Answer

Dark, but really well written.

Fortish · Answer

You should keep it up!

Fortish · Answer

Tag me on your next one pls

Dolphan · Answer

Very well written!! Never give up!

5StarFab · Answer

Okay,Thanks  @dolphan  and @fortish.I'll inform you both if i or when i make a new song.

5StarFab · Answer

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