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"Mia get up what is wrong with you " my mother says from down stairs " mom i'm already up so you can stop acting like you care " i yell back down she doesn't say anything back and i walk over to my mirror my hair in red hair that had now turned into a faded pink is sat neatly on my shoulders and i put on a black cropped tank top with some grey sweatpants and a grey jacket i look at myself for a long time until i hear my mom say " hurry the hell up mia i'm not telling you again" i curse under my breath and grab my phone and bookbag from my bed and head downstairs. i walk down and see my mom waiting at the bottom with a blueish green rope and her greyish black hair slicked back to a tight ponytail she shoots me a look and walks away from the bottom of the stairs what a great way to start my senior year, a little background details about me and my mom we used to be close like really close did every thing together but after my dad left her for another woman she blamed me for everything and hated me ever since but me and my dad on the other hand he is the best we still talk on the daily he is super rich he owns a buisness or two but my mom refused any of his money (which is crazy because i would have tooken that money so fast) but she stopped talking to my dad all together and got mad because i still talked to him which considered me a traitor in her eyes which is unfair but my dad is the reason i'm able to go to this super expensive school which my mother tried to stop me from going to but in the end agreed. back to the present i sit in my car at the entrance of the school terrified to go in because one i'm new and nobody else is and two everybody here is very rich and very stuck up( so i believe you know based on my knowledge of movies thats how they usually are ) it takes me 20 minutes but i finally get out my car and walk towards the front of the school when i hear " mia?" i turn around confused as to why anyone would be calling my name when i almost drop my bottom lip to the floor there was a gorgeous man standing before me ( i kid you not god did his thing on this man) " uh yeah" i say keeping my cool " it's me noah " i look at this goddess who is most definitely mistaken me for someone " uhh hi" i say still staring at him he looks at me for a moment before realizing that i really don't remember him " mia its me noah anthony mishells from camp " i look at him and my mouth drops again " WHAT theres no way thats you.... thoughts so far

Answer 1

Wait did u write this all by yourself?

Answer 2

Oh wow interesting! It's soo lovely!!

Answer 3

Can u make one about a goosebumps story lol

Answer 4

Yayy

Answer 5

i love it its so good keep it up

Answer 6

yess i love thiss

Answer 7

Dang that got deep, which I like because it reminds me of my life. But very good I think you should keep adding onto it and show us. I'd be happy to help if anything.

Answer 8

its amazing

Answer 9

This was painful. You have next to no sentence structure, this is all a big run-on sentence, very little punctuation or capitalization, the story is incomplete, numerous misspelled words, and the overall story reads like a very painful teen drama on the CW.

Answer 10

I love it keep writing

Answer 11

coolio