Question

TheAmazingK presents
poem tittle: turn around

wish i could see another life
where love really exists
for all it is here is death and no joy
and it feels like despair cause
ain't nothing like this, yeah nothing like this
have you ever felt the feeling?
are you trying to fight the feeling?
live life slow, take my hand
live life slow and take command
always live on the upside
turn around from the darkside

Edit: this is my 4th ever poem!, we loved the support we got on the 2nd poem! thank you all :D

Answer 1

(we is me and my gf, we work together on these)

Answer 2

nice

Answer 3

yo WWWWW poem

Answer 4

when i make poems its soo cringe XD

Answer 5

idk if it would be that cringe tho

Answer 6

WW poem lol

Answer 7

Hello 👋🏻...

Answer 8

Good poem!!!

Answer 9

cool

Answer 10

his gf speaking rn, we spent around 30 minutes on this poem in class and we both thought it turned out better than empty (our 3rd poem) which got the least support, we didn't expect it to be our second best poem yet thought, thank you all!

Answer 11

cool

Answer 12

lol

Answer 13

NICEEEE

Answer 14

nice gf mate. my gf hugs me way too often lol