I woke up with a bright light in my eyes making me close them instantly I opened them back up squinting when I heard my name, my mom. "Jen" I opened them all the way and turned to the side of the bed "Mom," I said confused what happened why was I here why was she here? her face was red and she had tears all over her face mixed with sweat I looked beside her and saw my dad who was looking at the floor motionless "Dad" he didn't move just ignored me that stung but I looked down at the bed and it came back to me I tried to end it.. it- it didn't work I instantly feel like I'm about to throw up and there are tears already down my face before I can stop them I can't do this, no I can't deal with this I turn to my side away from my parents and close my eyes.... I can't no why do I screw up everything I can't do anything right even die I couldn't deal with my parent's confusion and hurt that I had tried to leave them. " jesabelle" my mom said behind me my mom never calls me that unless it's serious "please just.... just tell me why you-" she didn't finish she broke down in tears on the floor I felt horrible and turned back towards her my heart broken " mom please it's not your fault " she ignored me and shook her head" yes it's all my fault " what do you think so far

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I woke up with a bright light in my eyes making me close them instantly I opened them back up squinting when I heard my name, my mom. "Jen" I opened them all the way and turned to the side of the bed "Mom," I said confused what happened why was I here why was she here? her face was red and she had tears all over her face mixed with sweat I looked beside her and saw my dad who was looking at the floor motionless "Dad"  he didn't move just ignored me that stung but I looked down at the bed and it came back to me I tried to end it.. it- it didn't work I instantly feel like I'm about to throw up and there are tears already down my face before I can stop them I can't do this, no I can't deal with this I turn to my side away from my parents and close my eyes.... I can't no why do I screw up everything I can't do anything right even die I couldn't deal with my parent's confusion and hurt that I had tried to leave them. " jesabelle" my mom said behind me my mom never calls me that unless it's serious "please just.... just tell me why you-" she didn't finish she broke down in tears on the floor I felt horrible and turned back towards her my heart broken " mom please it's not your fault " she ignored me and shook her head" yes it's all my fault "  what do you think so far

AKFM · Answer

I woke up with a bright light in my eyes making me close them instantly. I opened them back up squinting when I heard my name.
 "Jen!" called my mom. I opened them all the way and turned to the side of the bed.
 "Mom?" I said, confused as to what happened, and why I was here, why was she here? Her face was red and she had tears all over her face mixed with sweat I looked beside her and saw my dad looking at the floor motionless.
 "Dad?-"  he didn't move just ignored me. I looked down at the bed and it came back to me I tried to end it.. it- it didn't work I instantly felt like I was about to throw up and there were tears already down my face before I could stop them.
 I can't do this, no I can't deal with this...
 I turned to my side away from my parents and closed my eyes. 
I can't- no... why do I mess up everything? I can't do anything right, even dead. I couldn't deal with my parents' confusion and pain that I had tried to leave them. 
" Jesabelle" my mom said behind me. 
My mom never calls me that unless it's serious.
"Please just.... just tell me why you-" Before she could finish her sentence she broke down with tears. I felt horrible and turned back towards her. My heart broken.
"Mom, please it's not your fault " She ignored me and shook her head.
" It's all my fault" She muttered to herself.

There had to be a couple of things fixed but the story overall is amazing!

imyurdad009 · Answer

@akfm wrote:

I woke up with a bright light in my eyes making me close them instantly. I opened them back up squinting when I heard my name. "Jen!" called my mom. I opened them all the way and turned to the side of the bed. "Mom?" I said, confused as to what happened, and why I was here, why was she here? Her face was red and she had tears all over her face mixed with sweat I looked beside her and saw my dad looking at the floor motionless. "Dad?-" he didn't move just ignored me. I looked down at the bed and it came back to me I tried to end it.. it- it didn't work I instantly felt like I was about to throw up and there were tears already down my face before I could stop them. I can't do this, no I can't deal with this... I turned to my side away from my parents and closed my eyes. I can't- no... why do I mess up everything? I can't do anything right, even dead. I couldn't deal with my parents' confusion and pain that I had tried to leave them. " Jesabelle" my mom said behind me. My mom never calls me that unless it's serious. "Please just.... just tell me why you-" Before she could finish her sentence she broke down with tears. I felt horrible and turned back towards her. My heart broken. "Mom, please it's not your fault " She ignored me and shook her head. " It's all my fault" She muttered to herself. There had to be a couple of things fixed but the story overall is amazing!

🙏 ty ty

euphoriiic · Answer

coolioo

forgetmylife · Answer

Nice poem or short story but this isn’t the section to post it. You can post it writing by clicking all subjects and scrolling down to that category.