Question

I want someones opinion on this
I'm trying to work on something new
this is just a rough draft

Oooh oh
Secrets fill my brain moving hace
Nothing to expect from my heart but grace
Keeping time on my wrist so i don’t lose pace

(chorus)-flick of my lighter im lighting up an og
Something caught on fire
My heart is smoking
good kush the only thing i can admire
Rolling-

Rewind the time
My memories are all that are passing by
I wish that i could clean up all the grime
People make me sit here wondering why
…Is my love just a crime?