Help Pls I swear I have done this assignment like 5 to 6 times already and my teacher keep sending it back idk what to do now

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LaPrincessaHermosa · Answer

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OLIVER69 · Answer

I'm very good at writing. So I may help you. I hope I can do this well for you.

Unlike many students, I,(your name) would love to have this opportunity to be given a wonderful scholarship to this prestigious school. I have worked hard in all my years at high school. Now I also do well and help my community outside of school. I'm prepared to make sacrifices and commitments to my work. (I'll use examples of how I did good in high school now) You may think I'm just saying these things to earn the scholarship, but I'll give you some more in-depth examples. I had gotten all my credits for all of my required classes and then I still had time to take electives (talk about your electives). Then I was in multiple clubs after school and during school. For example, I was in the PROUD club and the creative writing club. (you can use these clubs or subsitute in ur own clubs.)

(I hope I helped. You can always add more info as you edit it a little.)

LaPrincessaHermosa · Answer

@oliver69 wrote:

I'm very good at writing. So I may help you. I hope I can do this well for you. Unlike many students, I,(your name) would love to have this opportunity to be given a wonderful scholarship to this prestigious school. I have worked hard in all my years at high school. Now I also do well and help my community outside of school. I'm prepared to make sacrifices and commitments to my work. (I'll use examples of how I did good in high school now) You may think I'm just saying these things to earn the scholarship, but I'll give you some more in-depth examples. I had gotten all my credits for all of my required classes and then I still had time to take electives (talk about your electives). Then I was in multiple clubs after school and during school. For example, I was in the PROUD club and the creative writing club. (you can use these clubs or subsitute in ur own clubs.) (I hope I helped. You can always add more info as you edit it a little.)

OMG ty SM I really appreciate this I have written this so many time and they keep sending it back to me ty again sm

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