Question

new song, ik it's not done but i couldn't think of anything else to put in it


Broken hearts and broken souls
Nowhere to run.
Nowhere to go
Only one wish, that'll never be true.
So just cry out, and let the sadness show
Let the angels.
Let the demons.
Go!
Sad hearts and broken souls

Answer 1

@5starfab, @williammcgeorge, @oliver69, @r3b3lmarine, @minyoung

Answer 2

want to see some of my poems/songs

Answer 3

hmmm ooo sounds nice 🫶

Answer 4

I don't know what to say i don't know what to do.All i know is that i F@cking hate you.You broke me down to the bone.Made me got out of my zone and now i'm all one in in the dark with out broken spark.Your not my friend just someone stuck in my head and i'm seeing red i just want to take the meds and stop seeing F@cking red.You made me fall and i lost it all.I was a mess cause of you and you watched me fall down didn't even stick around.Your something to me.And that something is a big old nothing.Your just fake and i don't care.Go take your lying self else where.You don't belong near me were never going to create "History" you will stay a mystery cause i don't want to be near you anymore i'm going to slam the door and watch you walk out on me like you did before.We used to be more then friends.But now i want you the dead don't message me or i'm leaving you on read i don't give A crap about what you said.Your just dead in the end.
I was alone i was out my zone cause of you i don't ever want to see you again.I been tripping over the fact that you stabbed me in the back.You broke me to my bone you make go out of my zone and made me feel so alone.I was struggling with life and you come and stab me with a damn knife. You left me in the dark and there went our spark.I was so alone i was always out of my zone.I can’t keep track of how many times you stabbed me in the back.You made my life dread and made it feel like i’m always dead.'m searching for clues to find out why did i even love when i just saw right through you.You never there for me at all you let me fall and i lost all.I lost my friend due to you and that's why i will never love you.Your just another mistake i made i'm ashamed i dated you i just hate you.you wanna make me down and make me cry but guess what no tears came out my eye i'm not going to cry over someone like you just know i can get someone brand new.

If i can go go back in time change this to world with out you.Cause i can't even stand you.Cause you been denying the fact you stabbed me in the damn back.Your not my friend just someone i'm leaving you on read.don't expect me to be your friend.Your just a parasite living in my head.Making me see red.You stabbed me in the back Your not my friend you wanted me dead you just wanted to get in my bed with your friend and try to play pretend wish i go back in this and erase you from my life cause your just hoe and you already know🥱You made me pour out my heart then you ripped it apart you were lying to me about everything.Your just another fake and my biggest mistake.You tore me apart when you broke my heart.

Answer 5

here you go

Answer 6

@mrmystery

Answer 7

@graysonunderwoods

Answer 8

Sounds good, if you need help writing more, I may be able to help.

Answer 9

Sounds nice, yet sad. I kind of like it though. Keep up the good work, sweetie. ^_^

Answer 10

@chuckthedonut

Answer 11

ooh, this sounds great so far, I think the more you write, the better it'll get, amazing job <3

Answer 12

@5172319

Answer 13

I think its good, maybe a little short but so far its good !!

Answer 14

and thanks

Answer 15

@luigi0210

Answer 16

@dividemusic

Answer 17

@whyjustwhy

Answer 18

???

Answer 19

wat?

Answer 20

i know but why did you mention me?

Answer 21

ohh its ok but i like pop music more

Answer 22

so what do y'all think of the name care free for this?