here's what has been added to my song, hope y'all like it and thank you @r3b3lmarine and @5starfab
for y'alls help

Broken hearts and broken souls
Nowhere to run.
Nowhere to go
Only one wish, that'll never be true.
So just cry out, and let the sadness show
Let the angels.
Let the demons.
Go!
Sad hearts and broken souls and i'm left all alone I've been out of my zone. Couldn't pick up the phone and change my tone.I was left on read thinking i was better of dead.you were never a friend just someone who was stuck in my head.the end is breaking me down and you let me fall and i lost it all..Now, I am working on myself, to show you that I don't need you.
You mean nothing to me now.
So get out of my head.
I am better off with myself, then I was with you
I can do this alone, I can be strong
These demons inside tell me that nothing is wrong
But really, you were the problem.

Question

here's what has been added to my song, hope y'all like it and thank you @r3b3lmarine and @5starfab
for y'alls help

Broken hearts and broken souls
Nowhere to run.
Nowhere to go
Only one wish, that'll never be true.
So just cry out, and let the sadness show
Let the angels.
Let the demons.
Go!
Sad hearts and broken souls and i'm left all alone I've been out of my zone. Couldn't pick up the phone and change my tone.I was left on read thinking i was better of dead.you were never a friend just someone who was stuck in my head.the end is breaking me down and you let me fall and i lost it all..Now, I am working on myself, to show you that I don't need you.
You mean nothing to me now.
So get out of my head.
I am better off with myself, then I was with you
I can do this alone, I can be strong
These demons inside tell me that nothing is wrong
But really, you were the problem.

Midnight97 · Answer

@oliver69,  @5starfab, @r3b3lmarine,@5172319

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@5172319

R3B3LMARINE · Answer

@dolphan

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@Minyoung

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@williammcgeorge

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@yourlocalrandom2000

YourlocalRandom2000 · Answer

Oh thats beautiful!

Midnight97 · Answer

@yourlocalrandom2000 wrote:

Oh thats beautiful!

thank you

YourlocalRandom2000 · Answer

@midnight97 wrote:

@yourlocalrandom2000 wrote:

Oh thats beautiful!

thank you

Your welcome!

Midnight97 · Answer

i made it because of my ex

YourlocalRandom2000 · Answer

Oh well, i hope u feel better!

Midnight97 · Answer

@yourlocalrandom2000 wrote:

Oh well, i hope u feel better!

i will

DivideMusic · Answer

Interesting. Are you hoping to turn the lyrics after "go" into a rap?

Midnight97 · Answer

@dividemusic wrote:

Interesting. Are you hoping to turn the lyrics after "go" into a rap?

no lol

DivideMusic · Answer

Ah. Well it'd sound great if you did lol.

(Kinda the type of music I'm into but eh)

Midnight97 · Answer

@tinydinouwu

Midnight97 · Answer

@dividemusic wrote:

Ah. Well it'd sound great if you did lol. (Kinda the type of music I'm into but eh)

thanks

TinydinoUwU · Answer

i love it

Midnight97 · Answer

@tinydinouwu wrote:

i love it

glad you do

luhivqqcherry · Answer

I likee this , i can feel the emotion in itt

Midnight97 · Answer

@luhivqqcherry wrote:

I likee this , i can feel the emotion in itt

it is about my ex bf

Midnight97 · Answer

@ilovemybabyrenne12

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@laya24

Laya24 · Answer

sing or rap ittttt yess lyrics are fire 0.0 like off the chain i love it in all honesty!

Midnight97 · Answer

@laya24 wrote:

sing or rap ittttt yess lyrics are fire 0.0 like off the chain i love it in all honesty!

thank you

Midnight97 · Answer

@bluewolf2004

Bluewolf2004 · Answer

wow.. I'm just.. I'm impressed nice!!

Midnight97 · Answer

@bluewolf2004 wrote:

wow.. I'm just.. I'm impressed nice!!

lol thanks

Midnight97 · Answer

@rose12345

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@laprincessahermosa

LaPrincessaHermosa · Answer

OMG👏 This is really good I feel the Emotion to this I LUV it👏👏👏

Midnight97 · Answer

@laprincessahermosa wrote:

OMG👏 This is really good I feel the Emotion to this I LUV it👏👏👏

thanks, it's been my dream to make songs for ppl and help ppl feel better about themselves.

LaPrincessaHermosa · Answer

@midnight97 wrote:

@laprincessahermosa wrote:

OMG👏 This is really good I feel the Emotion to this I LUV it👏👏👏

thanks, it's been my dream to make songs for ppl and help ppl feel better about themselves.

Well Ur doing an amazing job Keep it Ur Amazing

Midnight97 · Answer

@laprincessahermosa wrote:

@midnight97 wrote:

@laprincessahermosa wrote:

OMG👏 This is really good I feel the Emotion to this I LUV it👏👏👏

thanks, it's been my dream to make songs for ppl and help ppl feel better about themselves.

Well Ur doing an amazing job Keep it Ur Amazing

thank you and i will

5StarFab · Answer

Great job and you're welcome