Question

A poem/song I wrote for someone that I love. Bit different from my regular style but I am experimenting.

My Anchor (Drifting Away) - Rari

I just wanna love you, more than the stars above you
I just wanna hold you, so close to my heart
Your love is like a river, that never seems to tire
And it's all for me, nothing I need to desire

I just wanna love you, I just wanna hold you
I just wanna stay here forever in this moment
No one can take away, all the love that we share
Feelings that I can't explain, I just wanna love you

I just wanna love you, no matter what life throws at us
I just wanna hold you, even when the skies are grey
Your love will be my anchor, never letting me drift away
And when I'm feeling low, I'll find my strength in you

I just wanna love you, I just wanna hold you
I just wanna stay here forever in this moment
No one can take away, all the love that we share
Feelings that I can't explain, I just wanna love you

Your love completes me, and I can't explain it
No matter what we face, we'll be fine
You'll be my rock, and I'll be yours
Our love will last for eternity

I just wanna love you, I just wanna hold you
I want to be right here beside you, I'm feeling complete
I know that I'm not perfect, but I'm trying my best
To make sure that your heart ain't stressed

I'm here for you when you're feeling down
I won't let go and I won't back out
Whenever you need a shoulder to cry on, I'm here for you
When the storm is raging, I will be your shelter, too

I just wanna love you, I just wanna hold you
I just wanna stay here forever in this moment
No one can take away, all the love that we share
Feelings that I can't explain, I just wanna love you

Answer 1

really good that girl is special

Answer 2

or whoever you love

Answer 3

mhm

Answer 4

man.

Answer 5

god thi sis so good

Answer 6

heyyy this is an old friend just wanted to let you know that i had fun and I hope you doing good Jordan

Answer 7

Stress?

Answer 8

That you?

Answer 9

in the name

Answer 10

That's not you

Answer 11

It gives me the same vibes as foldin clothes by j cole

Answer 12

Good song, thanks for the feedback

Answer 13

Bruh "stress" went offline

Answer 14

oop

Answer 15

No

Answer 16

This girl sounds like a loved girl. I love this. It's beautiful.