Question

"Cold" Freestyle, inspired by @axie dm'ing me and telling me that he was cold

Act I: The Beginning

I'm cold
Shivering
Tryna keep my body warm
Hopin that the sun will come and thaw me out before the storm
Weather gettin colder
Tryna stay composed
Hopin i don't freeze before I get home
Coat barely enough to keep me warm
Feet are numb to where i can barely roam
My coats barely enough to keep me warm
Trying to stay composed in this winter storm
The weather's getting colder I'm feeling the freeze
The wind is blowing and I'm starting to sneeze

Act 2: Change

My life changed, a switch in the script
From dolla rice to diamonds and jewels my wrist lit
I jus got this billboard chart toppin hit
My style upgraded and I'm feelin so nice
When I'm rockin this ice I'm lookin so fly
I'm steppin up livin life like a king
My jewelry glistenin I'm always the bling
My swag is poppin I'm never the same
With this ice on my neck I'm feelin the fame

Act III: The Fall

Now I'm tryna take it back cuz I can't live life in the trap
Gotta focus on the real and put aside the bad, the crack
Gonna make a change for myself so I won't be stuck in the past
No more livin' in the street, won't let my freedom be passed

Act IV: The Ghost

I wanted the drugs, was bein ghetto with the thugs, gettin all the hos
But now like J Cole said, they murdered lil buddy, and I am now a ghost
I got two caps popped in my head, my career went down and I went down dead
Wait, I still alive, police wrappin all this tape around
Okay, nevermind, it's time, I'm losin my spirit
I'm losin my main two senses...
Sight and sound

Answer 1

@dolphan @mochaberries @youngballer @echofire

Answer 2

how do you even do this?? like, what. my goddddddd

Answer 3

I just think of words that go together and the topic I'm writing about

Answer 4

W’ness

Answer 5

Bro is literally a lightskin Kendrick

Answer 6

I just feel like gucci mane in 2006

Answer 7

LMAO

Answer 8

Well, the story sure took some turns.

Answer 9

haters really tryna talk they better watch their mouth
If they ever compass me. Things could go south

Answer 10

Haters needa back off
cuz I finna shoot em down no matter the cost

Answer 11

I been rapping since a jit
I been rapping for so long
Get glocky hit that boy
Spray his body like cologne
Haters hate then run away
Like Marvin Gaye What’s Goin On
I been running in this race
Fastest lane. I’m in my zone

Answer 12

Haters tryna put down cones
but i still standin tall wit no bones
Haters keep on hatin
But I keep climbin up dem stones

Answer 13

Climbin up rocks, if you mess wit me you get a taste of a glock
Don't try to mock
If you run up on me, lil b- n-, you finna be knocked

Answer 14

blazing through the night
got a glock in my pocket, ready for a fight
ain't no time to worry about doubtin
just keep my focus, never deplete my bouncin
ready to face any danger that's around
just make sure I don't take a fall to the ground.

Answer 15

AXIE ITS UR FEEDING TTIME

Answer 16

But did you ever give Axie that blanket?

Answer 17

idk

Answer 18

...

Answer 19

wowzers

Answer 20

fr talent

Answer 21

Thank you

Answer 22

of course!

Answer 23

W, work on your syllables when rhyming tho

Answer 24

Thanks for the positive feedback everyone

Answer 25

Damn bro, keep up the work fr. I think we should put our heads together one of these days and make something together.

Answer 26

Beautiful

Answer 27

marvelious

Answer 28

That's really good nice job.

Answer 29

beginner ts

Answer 30

"Haters needa back off
cuz I finna shoot em down no matter the cost" like Cookie what lol

Answer 31

Sandwich mane

Answer 32

js trash

Answer 33

I js wrote this "neighborhood superstar by youngboy" but I remixed it

Answer 34

I'm sorry but I got 2 do it 2 yah

Answer 35

u just hating cuz you be cussin on ya posts

Answer 36

i gotta write my lyrics in a way that follows qc rules my guy while you be sayin stuff like the n word and all that

Answer 37

facts tho