TheAmazingK presents: Motions

I'm goin' through the Motions, So muddy and dry
Baby, I'm runnin' and runnin' to hide
But ain't no place to go, like water they flow
I'm nowhere to be seen, just gone like my time
I'm out of my prime, yet this is the time
Lookin' for a love, one where there's peace
One where there's freedom and a place where I can sleep
Looking at the time, keeping away
I really need to know, what can I do today?

GN yall

Question

TheAmazingK presents: Motions

I'm goin' through the Motions, So muddy and dry
Baby, I'm runnin' and runnin' to hide
But ain't no place to go, like water they flow
I'm nowhere to be seen, just gone like my time
I'm out of my prime, yet this is the time
Lookin' for a love, one where there's peace
One where there's freedom and a place where I can sleep
Looking at the time, keeping away
I really need to know, what can I do today?

GN yall <3

TheAmazingKbw · Answer

ill check feedback in the morning

dgreer4 · Answer

So relatable! Keep up the good work!

Vanillacraft1kid · Answer

not bad ig

Vanillacraft1kid · Answer

lololololllololol people fan me :)

Lamborghini · Answer

Wow there are so many users with poetry talents on here, gj

5StarFab · Answer

This poem is good i'm truly inspired by the emotions

XJoltz · Answer

Ok did I ask no

5StarFab · Answer

@xjoltz wrote:

Ok did I ask no

Nobody even asked you nor does no one even care.