Question

okay okay here's something i made 5 weeks ago
i really don't know how good it is

Dark blue skies and blood red eyes
The devils are here to win
The angels are here to fight and save
Love falls and brakes.
The last thing you want is to say goodbye

Answer 1

@kagura

Answer 2

Reminds me of a thing i wrote.

Answer 3

This is amazing Asher keep it up 💙💙

Answer 4

It do be like that

Answer 5

I luv this! BOOTIFUL.

Answer 6

ywww @sandy99 :>

Answer 7

Dark blue skies and blood red eyes
The devils are here to win
The angels are here to fight and save
Love falls and brakes.
The last thing you want is to say goodbye
we've been on the edge wondering if this is the end.
i was in the rain trying to get rid of the pain People were driving me insane getting in my head making me see red.I thought you were my friend but it was all pretend.You were fake and made my heartbreak. i will never be the same and your the one to blame.I'm not going to let you in my heart you're the one who tore it all apart.I should have never picked up the phone i should left you all alone.My friends were right you were a hoe from the start and you broke my heart.never again will you be my friend you've been making me see all this crazy dreams that me F@cking scream out your name am i the one to blame i been falling down nobody is even around no more i shut all the doors i'm going down this road no more.

Answer 8

i edited it @sandy99

Answer 9

sounds cool.

Answer 10

ok

Answer 11

im replying late but sorry brova. Its good i like it

Answer 12

cool

Answer 13

Are you looking for it to kinda rhyme or whats the point of the poem?

Answer 14

him

Answer 15

amazing