Question

Here is a lil thing I wrote for Shoto Todoroki from My Hero Academia (I wrote it where Todoroki is singing to his father about him and his mom):

Some scars don't fade away with time,
And I know your pride gets in the way of your mind.
And I wish that I could forget
The trauma that you caused,
The torment,
You never chose to pause.
I'm fine with being the flame you despise,
But for her, I'm cold as Ice

(Let me know what yall think of it <3)

Answer 1

noice it is really good!!

Answer 2

wow so good

Answer 3

ima add some to it

Answer 4

Some scars don't fade away with time,
And I know your pride gets in the way of your mind.
And I wish that I could forget
The trauma that you caused,
The torment,
You never chose to pause.
I'm fine with being the flame you despise,
But for her, I'm cold as Ice i paid the price.
I'm in the end and i can't get the stuff you did to me out of my head.
You make me take the blame for your own damn game.

Answer 5

I love it