Question

which poem is better?

poem 1:
Love is fun, love is fierce
Always looking for a heart to Peirce
I pray to god that it's not mine
'cause im constantly looking for something divine
Who will it be? Who will it be?
I pray to god it isn't me
poem title: love

poem 2:
I can't stand fights, but I can sit and watch
I've been forced all my life to pick and choose
I wonder who else is wearing my shoes
life used to be gold, but now it's gray
Who else feels this same array?
poem title: life

poem 3:
feeling empty, a big hole inside
feeling like I need someone to confide
but no you don't, don't fall inside
too late, you didn't warn me in time
Oh, what will we do? what will we do?
let someone else fill my shoes
poem title: Empty

poem 4:
Life is cold, but it's also real
And the people seem to kill and steal
But fewer people ask questions
And go along with things said
Scary things do happen, like love death
Commitments are hard, but life is harder
And about life, I have too many questions
poem title: Questions

poem 5:
Demons in my life, so scary and mad
They tear me apart when my life goes well
And they put me down when I'm feeling unwell
My love goes wrong because of my demons
Nobody thinks that they are okay
But nobody sees the battles that last all-day
Our wars are like Ukraine & Russia
Nobody winning in the fight soon
No emotional support, keep it inside
And no not in the family, but in my mind
poem title: Demons In My Life

poem 6:
I'm goin' through the Motions, So muddy and dry
Baby, I'm runnin' and runnin' to hide
But ain't no place to go, like water they flow
I'm nowhere to be seen, just gone like my time
I'm out of my prime, yet this is the time
Lookin' for a love, one where there's peace
One where there's freedom and a place where I can sleep
Looking at the time, keeping away
I need to know, what can I do today?
poem title: Motions

Answer 1

these are the poems I've currently posted here, I got more but I just think they just bad

Answer 2

lol

Answer 3

some of these poems are cringe

Answer 4

u need to like upgrade the standards

Answer 5

no thats y im saying they cringe

Answer 6

try writing one then :l

Answer 7

i did alrerady

Answer 8

watch ez

Answer 9

they take only like 10 mins if ur good at it

Answer 10

some of these took about a hour and a half

Answer 11

Richie Grinchie aint no snichy
bit picky, pulls ur aunt vicky
he got them hoes (hoes)
with them juicy toes (toes)
go step on a crack
check ya mama's back
Grinchies jacked look at his six pack

Answer 12

title name: Richie Grinchie

Answer 13

thats just a sad rap song

Answer 14

mh?

Answer 15

and it took you that long for 7 lines?

Answer 16

all ur poems are dipressed

Answer 17

Uh.

Answer 18

okay and? ur first 3 poems are also short

Answer 19

I write poems 🤓

Answer 20

ya

Answer 21

Alright.

Answer 22

bet

Answer 23

cmonnnn

Answer 24

breh u quit

Answer 25

Love, and despair, a combination so rare
One so pure, one so unfair

Love is the light, despair the night
One brings us joy, the other fright

Love can bring us hope, despair can bring us grief
One can bring us life, the other brings us death

Love is the one that's here to stay
Despair is one that's here to take away

Love is the key, despair the door
If you open it, it will leave you sore

Love can bring us healing, despair can bring us pain
Love is the one that will remain

Love is the one we must embrace
Despair is one we must erase.

Answer 26

i didn't quit.

Answer 27

mhhhhh

Answer 28

i still think mines is better :)

Answer 29

uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Answer 30

Poems and songs aren't the same thing.

Answer 31

@vanillacraft1kid

Answer 32

that was a poem

Answer 33

That was a song sir/ma'am

Answer 34

mines was a poem and im a sir

Answer 35

theamazingk on the other hand is a ma'am jk jk :troll:

Answer 36

eheh

Answer 37

amazing chilll

Answer 38

that was the same poem

Answer 39

i just added a few thing eheh

Answer 40

so why it take u so long if u just added stuff?

Answer 41

oh lord.

Answer 42

poem 1 is my fav cuz its da best

Answer 43

ima add some more to poem one.

Answer 44

poem 5

Answer 45

5StarFab

Answer 46

Demons in my life, so scary and mad
They tear me apart when my life goes well
And they put me down when I'm feeling unwell
My love goes wrong because of my demons
Nobody thinks that they are okay
But nobody sees the battles that last all-day
Our wars are like Ukraine & Russia
Nobody winning in the fight soon
No emotional support, keep it inside
And no not in the family, but in my mind
i'm one of a kind always going to be crossing that line.
I'm fighting for my life hope i do this right I've been moving around and i hear a weird sound in my head it's telling me jump off the ledge it's going to be you're pledge.I'm on the edge of this rope with no hope left inside of me it's a tragedy. But i won't give up on you just give me second and i'll come through for you

Answer 47

i edited poem 5

Answer 48

well added more too

Answer 49

oh

Answer 50

ok

Answer 51

TheAmazingKbw

Answer 52

umm nice poems

Answer 53

yw ^^

Answer 54

your poems are amayzing keep it up and dont listen to them i feel you on every single on of them

Answer 55

but i wanna know whats the moral on each one

Answer 56

3rd moral is like in 6th grade after a one-sided relation ship with someone, i felt empty so i just used that for my poem
4th moral is just about life, like failure is not really a option in life fr

Answer 57

5th moral is like in 6th grade again i felt so bad on myself and it just sucked to be there, 5th and 6th grade were the hardest for me fr
6th moral is again about the end of 6th grade where i would just keep to myself fr, like not even my friends even knew me cause my entire personality was just gone off the face of the earth

Answer 58

all my poems have a meaning and they go deeper than what meets the eye

Answer 59

but for the 2nd its the same but different i fight with my father and my sis doesn't like it

Answer 60

yeah but i agree

Answer 61

WE GOT 69 REPLIES LES GO

Answer 62

i have a poem wanna check it out

Answer 63

sure

Answer 64

thx

Answer 65

ima copy and paste it ok

Answer 66

k

Answer 67

its spanish

Answer 68

k

Answer 69

@vanillacraft1kid don't even start

Answer 70

En la naturaleza, donde siempre brilla el sol,
Vivían criaturas grandes y pequeñas, divinas.
Desde el ratón más pequeño hasta el león más poderoso,
Cada uno único, con su noción especial.

El guepardo, veloz como un rayo, veloz y libre,
Caza a su presa con gracia y alegría.
Sus puntos tan brillantes, como las estrellas en la noche,
Es una belleza, un espectáculo digno de contemplar, una delicia.

La jirafa, de cuello largo y esbelto,
Alcanza las hojas, tan altas y tan limpias.
Sus manchas tan suaves, como la luna en el cielo,
Es una maravilla, una maravilla a la vista.

El elefante, tan fuerte y tan sabio,
Con su trompa tan larga, puede alcanzar los cielos.
Su piel arrugada, como la tierra tan vieja,
Es un símbolo, una historia que contar.

La cebra, con sus rayas tan atrevidas,
Una obra maestra, una obra de arte tan fría.
Su melena tan vibrante, como el sol en el cielo,
Es un tesoro, una joya en el ojo.

El canguro, con su bolsa tan calentita,
Un refugio seguro, un hogar así.
Su joey tan pequeño, pero tan fuerte,
Un manojo de amor, una canción preciosa.

Los animales, tan diversos y grandiosos,
Un mundo de maravillas, a nuestras órdenes.
Cada uno especial, cada uno único,
Una belleza para la vista, un regalo tan elegante.

Answer 71

ill translate it to english

Answer 72

In the wild, where the sun always shines,
Lived creatures great and small, divine.
From the tiniest mouse to the mightiest lion,
Each one is unique, with their own special notion.

The cheetah, fast as lightning, swift and free,
Hunts for her prey with grace and glee.
Her spots so bright, like the stars in the night,
She's a beauty, a sight to behold, a delight.

The giraffe, with his long, slender neck,
Reaches for the leaves, so high and so neat.
His spots so gentle, like the moon in the sky,
He's a wonder, a marvel to the eye.

The elephant, so strong and so wise,
With his trunk so long, he can reach the skies.
His wrinkled skin, like the earth so old,
He's a symbol, a story to be told.

The zebra, with his stripes so bold,
A masterpiece, a work of art so cold.
His mane so vibrant, like the sun in the sky,
He's a treasure, a gem in the eye.

The kangaroo, with her pouch so warm,
A safe haven, a home so form.
Her joey so small, yet so strong,
A bundle of love, a precious song.

The animals, so diverse and grand,
A world of wonder, at our command.
Each one special, each one unique,
A beauty to behold, a treat so sleek.

Answer 73

i know a little spanish

Answer 74

hi

Answer 75

I like poem 5 the most

Answer 76

I like all of the poem and plus the last poem of urs depicts the present of Palestine. Well keep up the good work!