I want some options on what you guys think of my new song that I made. I love to make songs and the beats to go with it. Just wanna know what you guys think TY!
💔SOS💔

I'm SOS
Throwing shots back trying to forget about you
Hills are burning
I'm screaming
💔SOS💔

She proved those haters wrong
Yeah, she don't stay for long
She don't play she's gone
Ain't got time for games
She's looking for where she belongs
It's normal to be a little scared
But I wanna bend the rules and play truth or dare
I don't want to remember
I tell the world that I'm fine
While I dive into fire

So sick of feeling like a stranger in my own skin
I'm still waiting for the light after the darkness
Losing hope for a new life to begin
Maybe fairytales are anything
But honest and happiness is just a broken promise

You made me doubt myself
You made me come undone
You made me question everything I thought love was
You made me go crazy
But you made me pick up all the pieces
That you left me broken with
Said I couldn't live without you
But it's looking like I did

You made me walk away
You made me slam the door
But you made this heart
A little stronger than it was before
But I'm better off without you lately
Loving the woman you made me

Question

I want some options on what you guys think of my new song that I made. I love to make songs and the beats to go with it. Just wanna know what you guys think TY! 
💔SOS💔

I'm SOS
Throwing shots back trying to forget about you 
Hills are burning
I'm screaming
💔SOS💔

She proved those haters wrong
Yeah, she don't stay for long
She don't play she's gone 
Ain't got time for games
She's looking for where she belongs
It's normal to be a little scared
But I wanna bend the rules and play truth or dare
I don't want to remember
I tell the world that I'm fine
While I dive into fire

So sick of feeling like a stranger in my own skin 
I'm still waiting for the light after the darkness
Losing hope for a new life to begin
Maybe fairytales are anything
But honest and happiness is just a broken promise

You made me doubt myself
You made me come undone
You made me question everything I thought love was
You made me go crazy
But you made me pick up all the pieces
That you left me broken with
Said I couldn't live without you
But it's looking like I did

You made me walk away
You made me slam the door
But you made this heart
A little stronger than it was before
But I'm better off without you lately 
Loving the woman you made me

luhivqqcherry · Answer

omggg

luhivqqcherry · Answer

I love thiss

BexleyBrooks · Answer

@luhivqqcherry wrote:

I love thiss

Ty! I have more like it that I may post for your guys opinions

luhivqqcherry · Answer

@bexleybrooks wrote:

@luhivqqcherry wrote:

I love thiss

Ty! I have more like it that I may post for your guys opinions

yess post moree

luhivqqcherry · Answer

I love every word in this song

BexleyBrooks · Answer

@luhivqqcherry wrote:

I love every word in this song

I make songs that ik other people may relate too. My songs have helped lots of people through hard times which I am grateful for

luhivqqcherry · Answer

@bexleybrooks wrote:

@luhivqqcherry wrote:

I love every word in this song

I make songs that ik other people may relate too. My songs have helped lots of people through hard times which I am grateful for

yess keep making songs and you could make it big one dayyy

BexleyBrooks · Answer

@luhivqqcherry wrote:

@bexleybrooks wrote:

@luhivqqcherry wrote:

I love every word in this song

I make songs that ik other people may relate too. My songs have helped lots of people through hard times which I am grateful for

yess keep making songs and you could make it big one dayyy

Awww ty!

luhivqqcherry · Answer

@bexleybrooks wrote:

@luhivqqcherry wrote:

@bexleybrooks wrote:

@luhivqqcherry wrote:

I love every word in this song

I make songs that ik other people may relate too. My songs have helped lots of people through hard times which I am grateful for

yess keep making songs and you could make it big one dayyy

Awww ty!

yww

Neaveh · Answer

I luv themXD

YourlocalRandom2000 · Answer

Ooo thats greatt!!

BexleyBrooks · Answer

I want yawls opinions on this song I made!
I’m Not A Good Enough Daughter

Your smile says it's okay
But I just know there's no way
Cause you've been crying all night
While I'm waiting for the fight to start again

It's always been a circle 
You yell & scream but I don't give you a reaction, so you don't get satisfaction 
But I'm waterfalls behind closed doors
I think you love me more
But the truth is that is hurts me even more than you'll never know

I'm afraid that you'll see
All the things that we'll never be
Because we're to good at hurting each other 
You don't think I see, all the things you do for me
I keep blaming you but maybe I'm worse
Maybe I haven't been a good enough daughter

Neaveh · Answer

Its great! Its really great when you put emotion in your writing which is what you have done with this piece.

thtguy · Answer

make it longer I can see it being like 1:30sec song yk

luhivqqcherry · Answer

I lovee it, its amazing the emotion that goes into your songs are amazing

hannahj · Answer

That is really good!!! Good vibes going! Teach me pws

BexleyBrooks · Answer

@hannahj wrote:

That is really good!!! Good vibes going! Teach me pws

You wanna know how to write a song? I can help if you want :)

BexleyBrooks · Answer

@thtguy wrote:

make it longer I can see it being like 1:30sec song yk

I am working on the beat and it will be more than 1:30sec long. I am thinking the beginning will be around 20-30 seconds before the words come into play and then the ending would have very light singing and about another 30 seconds of just like the beat/music. I hope that makes sense lol