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dgreer4:

Hey guys here's another poem. I just now finished it. I was working on it for a while but it took me weeks to really finish it. I hope you like it... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Receding footsteps Down the stairs I follow the sound of your voice but you're not there Every day you haunt me In my sleep, in my dreams... I want back what's already gone Most days my heart is heavy but I know I have to be strong Because that's what you would tell me If you were still around In my mind I hear your laughter but you're nowhere to be found Why did you leave me? It isn't fair I'm still living, while you're with the man upstairs I know it's wrong But if I could I'd change places so dying you never would. Things happen for a reason even we don't understand Even if heartbreak was a part of God's plan.. "He always has a reason" you used to say But when you left the joy was replaced with pain... I wish I could bring you back I wish I could've made you see That dying isn't always the answer You weren't alone, you had me.....

daddyj592:

ngl this poem is good

dgreer4:

In time and space where hearts collide A beautiful dance that takes us for a ride A combination of passion, enchanting the mind A whirlpool of emotions too strong to fight It'll pull you in like a hook on a line Making temptation easy to find With every beat, a tale unfolds Of love's embrace, a sight to behold In a world where souls intertwine, Love's symphony, both gentle and divine. Through whispered words and a tender touch, These parts of you that I love so much. Emotions surge like a tempest's roar, Leaving us wanting, craving for more. But love's dance can lead to despair When hearts are broken, left threadbare. The once enchanting spell, now fades away Leaving us wounded in bitter dismay. Yet even in heartbreaks bitter sting, A seed of hope, like a birds sweet melody. For wounds will heal and hearts will mend. Love's resilience, it never truly ends.

daddyj592:

wow that is amazing

Nothnxx:

@dgreer4 wrote:
In time and space where hearts collide A beautiful dance that takes us for a ride A combination of passion, enchanting the mind A whirlpool of emotions too strong to fight It'll pull you in like a hook on a line Making temptation easy to find With every beat, a tale unfolds Of love's embrace, a sight to behold In a world where souls intertwine, Love's symphony, both gentle and divine. Through whispered words and a tender touch, These parts of you that I love so much. Emotions surge like a tempest's roar, Leaving us wanting, craving for more. But love's dance can lead to despair When hearts are broken, left threadbare. The once enchanting spell, now fades away Leaving us wounded in bitter dismay. Yet even in heartbreaks bitter sting, A seed of hope, like a birds sweet melody. For wounds will heal and hearts will mend. Love's resilience, it never truly ends.
u write so great poems so deep that it feels like some hand of art.

dgreer4:

@nothnxx wrote:
@dgreer4 wrote:
In time and space where hearts collide A beautiful dance that takes us for a ride A combination of passion, enchanting the mind A whirlpool of emotions too strong to fight It'll pull you in like a hook on a line Making temptation easy to find With every beat, a tale unfolds Of love's embrace, a sight to behold In a world where souls intertwine, Love's symphony, both gentle and divine. Through whispered words and a tender touch, These parts of you that I love so much. Emotions surge like a tempest's roar, Leaving us wanting, craving for more. But love's dance can lead to despair When hearts are broken, left threadbare. The once enchanting spell, now fades away Leaving us wounded in bitter dismay. Yet even in heartbreaks bitter sting, A seed of hope, like a birds sweet melody. For wounds will heal and hearts will mend. Love's resilience, it never truly ends.
u write so great poems so deep that it feels like some hand of art.
Aww thank you 🫶🏼

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