How do you guys like this song I made? It was a while back that I made this one.
Un-Break my heart

Don't leave me in all this pain
Don't leave me out in the rain
Come back and bring back my smile
Come and take these tears away
I need your arms to hold me now
The nights are so unkind
Bring back those nights when I held you beside me
Un-break my heart
Say you'll love me again
Undo this hurt you caused
When you left me
And walked out of my life
Un-cry these tears
I cried so hard
Un-break my heart
My heart
Never say goodbye please
Bring back the joy to my life
Don't leave me here with these tears
Come and kiss this pain away
I can't forget this day you left
Time is so unkind
And life is so cruel without you here beside me
Un-break my heart
Say you'll love me again
Undo this hurt you caused
When you left me
And walked out of my life
Un-cry these tears
I cried so hard
Un-break my heart, oh, ooh
Ooh
Don't leave me in all this pain
Don't leave me out in the rain
Bring back the nights when I held you beside me
Un-break my heart
Say you'll love me again
Undo this hurt you caused
When you walked out the door
And walked out of my life
Un-cry these tears
I cried so many, many times
Oh, un-break my
Un-break my heart, oh baby
Come back and say you love me
Un-break my heart, sweet darlin'
Without you I just can't go on
Can't go on
(Say that you love me, say that you love me)
(Tell me you love me, un-break my heart)
(Say that you love me, say that you love me)
(Tell me you love me, un-break my heart)

Question

How do you guys like this song I made? It was a while back that I made this one. 
Un-Break my heart

Don't leave me in all this pain
Don't leave me out in the rain
Come back and bring back my smile
Come and take these tears away
I need your arms to hold me now
The nights are so unkind
Bring back those nights when I held you beside me
Un-break my heart
Say you'll love me again
Undo this hurt you caused
When you left me
And walked out of my life
Un-cry these tears
I cried so hard
Un-break my heart
My heart
Never say goodbye please
Bring back the joy to my life
Don't leave me here with these tears
Come and kiss this pain away
I can't forget this day you left
Time is so unkind
And life is so cruel without you here beside me
Un-break my heart
Say you'll love me again
Undo this hurt you caused
When you left me
And walked out of my life
Un-cry these tears
I cried so hard
Un-break my heart, oh, ooh
Ooh
Don't leave me in all this pain
Don't leave me out in the rain
Bring back the nights when I held you beside me
Un-break my heart
Say you'll love me again
Undo this hurt you caused
When you walked out the door
And walked out of my life
Un-cry these tears
I cried so many, many times
Oh, un-break my
Un-break my heart, oh baby
Come back and say you love me
Un-break my heart, sweet darlin'
Without you I just can't go on
Can't go on
(Say that you love me, say that you love me)
(Tell me you love me, un-break my heart)
(Say that you love me, say that you love me)
(Tell me you love me, un-break my heart)

5StarFab · Answer

I'm going to add some to it.

luhivqqcherry · Answer

BEXLEYYY YOU DID AN AMAZING JOB ON THIS SONGGG < 3

BexleyBrooks · Answer

@5starfab wrote:

I'm going to add some to it.

what do you mean?

BexleyBrooks · Answer

@luhivqqcherry wrote:

BEXLEYYY YOU DID AN AMAZING JOB ON THIS SONGGG < 3

Thank you!

5StarFab · Answer

Don't leave me in all this pain
Don't leave me out in the rain
Come back and bring back my smile
Come and take these tears away
I need your arms to hold me now
The nights are so unkind
Bring back those nights when I held you beside me
Un-break my heart
Say you'll love me again
Undo this hurt you caused
When you left me
And walked out of my life
Un-cry these tears
I cried so hard
Un-break my heart
My heart
Never say goodbye please
Bring back the joy to my life
Don't leave me here with these tears
Come and kiss this pain away
I can't forget this day you left
Time is so unkind
And life is so cruel without you here beside me
Un-break my heart
Say you'll love me again
Undo this hurt you caused
When you left me
And walked out of my life
Un-cry these tears
I cried so hard
Un-break my heart, oh, ooh
Ooh
Don't leave me in all this pain
Don't leave me out in the rain
Bring back the nights when I held you beside me
Un-break my heart
Say you'll love me again
Undo this hurt you caused
When you walked out the door
And walked out of my life
Un-cry these tears
I cried so many, many times
Oh, un-break my
Un-break my heart, oh baby
Come back and say you love me
Un-break my heart, sweet darlin'
Without you I just can't go on
Can't go on
(Say that you love me, say that you love me)
(Tell me you love me, un-break my heart)
(Say that you love me, say that you love me)
(Tell me you love me, un-break my heart)
Come back to me baby i haven't been the same lately 
i need you by my side cause you are my ride or die.
everyday is the same without you please baby know that i love you.
Cause I've been here everyday wishing you knew i felt this way for you .Please don't leave me in the dark i don't want to lose our spark you mean so much to  please i don't want to ruin this chemistry.
This feels so real to me come on baby i just want to live peacefully with you and it's true

5StarFab · Answer

i meant like add some more words and shi

BexleyBrooks · Answer

@5starfab wrote:

Don't leave me in all this pain Don't leave me out in the rain Come back and bring back my smile Come and take these tears away I need your arms to hold me now The nights are so unkind Bring back those nights when I held you beside me Un-break my heart Say you'll love me again Undo this hurt you caused When you left me And walked out of my life Un-cry these tears I cried so hard Un-break my heart My heart Never say goodbye please Bring back the joy to my life Don't leave me here with these tears Come and kiss this pain away I can't forget this day you left Time is so unkind And life is so cruel without you here beside me Un-break my heart Say you'll love me again Undo this hurt you caused When you left me And walked out of my life Un-cry these tears I cried so hard Un-break my heart, oh, ooh Ooh Don't leave me in all this pain Don't leave me out in the rain Bring back the nights when I held you beside me Un-break my heart Say you'll love me again Undo this hurt you caused When you walked out the door And walked out of my life Un-cry these tears I cried so many, many times Oh, un-break my Un-break my heart, oh baby Come back and say you love me Un-break my heart, sweet darlin' Without you I just can't go on Can't go on (Say that you love me, say that you love me) (Tell me you love me, un-break my heart) (Say that you love me, say that you love me) (Tell me you love me, un-break my heart) Come back to me baby i haven't been the same lately i need you by my side cause you are my ride or die. everyday is the same without you please baby know that i love you. Cause I've been here everyday wishing you knew i felt this way for you .Please don't leave me in the dark i don't want to lose our spark you mean so much to please i don't want to ruin this chemistry. This feels so real to me come on baby i just want to live peacefully with you and it's true

OMG I LOVE WHAT YOU ADDED!

5StarFab · Answer

i was singing it while writing it lmao

5StarFab · Answer

cause i barely write love songs

Subtonic7 · Answer

if ur heart is broken how u alive

5StarFab · Answer

she meant like someone emotionally  broke her heart.

Subtonic7 · Answer

Ohhh

BexleyBrooks · Answer

@subtonic7 wrote:

if ur heart is broken how u alive

I write songs about everything. Mostly about how I feel or know how other people might relate to them

BexleyBrooks · Answer

@5starfab wrote:

she meant like someone emotionally broke her heart.

Yes, multiple people have

Subtonic7 · Answer

(guyyysss i was joking)

BexleyBrooks · Answer

@subtonic7 wrote:

(guyyysss i was joking)

okay?

Subtonic7 · Answer

ok

HotPockets14 · Answer

good job both of you @5starfab and @bexleybrooks