Question

pomes a thread

Answer 1

im drowneding in the pain
cuz little did they know i was drinking from the glassis sorrows
the smile on my face might be a little fake
maby thats why peole seem so far away
look at them in the daylight
left in the dark with nothing left
im trying to hide everything away
it might be driveing me a little insaine
its so lonley
look at them with the bright smiles looking so pain free
look at them there all so far away
me and my fake little smiles
only there when im with the bright little stars
when im alone im dwroeneding in the voide of pain
maby its cuz i dont know how to be like them
i cant quite shine like i used too
drowneding in the sorrow
they all seem so far away
im trying to hide away
its makeing me go mentley insaine
drinking from the glass of all of my sorrow and pains
hereing some one say my name
looking at them not quite a shine but not quite burnt out
not feeling as lonly when they came along
look at them with there glass of sorrow and pain
both feeling a little insaine
nobody with a fake smile to hide away the pain
feeling freee to cry it away
throw the glasses far far far away
not feeling like we need to hide away
no longger going insaine
no longer lonly with my sorrw and pain
feeeling loved with every smile at me

Answer 2

i think the stars are shineing
oh shineing so bright
ur in my blind spot
i think its so amazing
ur smile is blinding
blinding
brighter than the sun
oh were so fun
shineing
ur so blinding
so bright
show me what ur made of
i can feel ur energey
its shineing
your brighter than the sun
ur in my blind spot
shineing
ur amazing
like the stars
ur shineing
i can feel ur anergey
ur shineing
ur im my blind spot
shineing
ur smile is just blinding.

Answer 3

stars
in the sky
holding hands looking up at the night sky
not evin the booms of fireworks can distract me from your smile
the way you have no fears
it warms my heart
your hand is warm
mine is cold
you warm it with the simpulest of tuch
when you smile its like the whole world stops
your like the light in the dark
gideing me in the right derection
i could wish for nothing more
cuz i see all of the stars
but alls i need is the one
your brightest star in the sky
were holding hands looking up
fireworks are are backround music
the cutest why when you cover your smile
playing with your hoodie strings
you have no fears for this world
you warm my hand when it gets cold
your the light of dawn after a long night
ur the slight patter of rain on my window
brighter than all of the stars combind
cuz you light up the night sky
when were holding hands
waching fireworks
evin tho i my eyes wont leave your smile.
you are the stars
in the sky

Answer 4

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Answer 5

pretty good poem

Answer 6

I love you lea

Answer 7

your a legend

Answer 8

poet legend

Answer 9

its really good

Answer 10

nice nice

Answer 11

Its nice keep up the work

Answer 12

it look amazing keep it up!!

Answer 13

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Answer 14

its really good. keep it up

Answer 15

it's amazing