What is wrong with this thesis and outline statement that I worked on?

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HotPockets14 · Answer

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Spectrum · Answer

Okay so you can stick to your thesis but in my opinion electric cars wouldn't release toxic gases into the atmosphere.

HotPockets14 · Answer

I worked on this with a teacher and this is one of the projects she failed me on. She also failed me on a essay about

HotPockets14 · Answer

@spectrum wrote:

Okay so you can stick to your thesis but in my opinion electric cars wouldn't release toxic gases into the atmosphere.

Okay, but one teacher said this looked great so I turned it in and this said this:

Spectrum · Answer

Um for your final statement you need to remove that they can blow up, since cars that use gasoline can do the same thing.

Spectrum · Answer

Did the teacher give you a resource to read off of and base your essay from?

HotPockets14 · Answer

@spectrum wrote:

Um for your final statement you need to remove that they can blow up, since cars that use gasoline can do the same thing.

Yeah I get that but I have a counterclaim for that one since I need a couterclaim for one of them

Spectrum · Answer

@spectrum wrote:

Did the teacher give you a resource to read off of and base your essay from?

HotPockets14 · Answer

@spectrum wrote:

Did the teacher give you a resource to read off of and base your essay from?

Nope she said that I need to find my own resource

Spectrum · Answer

Okay what resource did you find?

HotPockets14 · Answer

@hotpockets14 wrote:

@spectrum wrote:

Did the teacher give you a resource to read off of and base your essay from?

Nope she said that I need to find my own resource

witch I dont think is fair

Spectrum · Answer

DM me the link to your resource. It won't be allowed to be shared in this Post, it's a rule smh.

HotPockets14 · Answer

@spectrum wrote:

DM me the link to your resource. It won't be allowed to be shared in this Post, it's a rule smh.

okay I will