Question

should i publish this poem I made?
(Depression)
Rain falling out of the sky
Never going to know when you will cry
gloomy and dark haze over your eyes
wishing and waiting for a better prize
Sadness is in the air
But when will you know, when will you care
Maybe you'll care when they are gone
Maybe you'll care after their final dawn
Maybe after all the pain ends
You will notice the stuggle they were in
Maybe they have flown up on so high
Maybe now their watching You from the sky
Maybe you'll finally understand why
Why they look up at you with teary eyes
dont you wonder why so many kids wanna die
depression is the reason and not the only reason why
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English | Graded Assignment | Write a Descriptive Poem or Essay
Help all sad kids and dont think twice
Maybe you're the only one to give them advice
Maybe you're the one to lead them to shore
Maybe you can help them find their real Roar
Maybe you can help them see
Finally they can live like you and me
in a world where they can feel free
And maybe you can help them get off their knees
Help these kids see the light
And show them there is nothing to fright
THE END

Answer 1

I did not know u write poems uu got talent girll this poem is amazing.

Answer 2

wow.. just amazing 💯💯

Answer 3

thats a legendary poem

Answer 4

yessss you shoulddddddd

Answer 5

you should be proud, and you should better than what i can do

Answer 6

yeah you do way better than meee

Answer 7

i cant even do a essay

Answer 8

me neither bro

Answer 9

How- Like i can't evvn write essays this good .

Answer 10

im pretty sure no one can

Answer 11

I mean i can with some but we be having poem essays and i cant it nun like this

Answer 12

oh really? i can't write essays for crap

Answer 13

Lol yeh im pretty good at them ill post one if i rb how to post on here-

Answer 14

i write songs thats all i do

Answer 15

Thats wsp i've never wrote one

Answer 16

thanks for all the support <3

Answer 17

Np !!

Answer 18

your welcome

Answer 19

yeah lol

Answer 20

Yes

Answer 21

so i should publish this?

Answer 22

I ain't reading allat, but sure, publish it

Answer 23

follow ur dream

Answer 24

if u want to do it

Answer 25

and that is the best poem i have ever read

Answer 26

yes its really good

Answer 27

yes, you should your poem was touching.

Answer 28

this part of the poem was heartbreaking

Answer 29

When i wrote this poem i wrote it to inspire the world to listen to the kids who cry out for help and want to seek the love they deserve

Answer 30

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