Question

Should I publish this poem?
Depression
Rain falling out of the sky
Never going to know when you will cry
gloomy and dark haze over your eyes
wishing and waiting for a better prize
Sadness is in the air
But when will you know, when will you care
Maybe you'll care when they are gone
Maybe you'll care after their final dawn
Maybe after all the pain ends
You will notice the struggle they were in
Maybe they have flown up on so high
Maybe now their watching You from the sky
Maybe you'll finally understand why
Why they look up at you with teary eyes
don't you wonder why so many kids wanna die
depression is the reason and not the only reason why
Help all sad kids and don't think twice
Maybe you're the only one to give them advice
Maybe you're the one to lead them to shore
Maybe you can help them find their real Roar
Maybe you can help them see
Finally they can live like you and me
in a world where they can feel free
And maybe you can help them get off their knees
Help these kids see the light
And show them there is nothing to fright
THE END

Answer 1

had to resend it so the K12 part didnt show 😅

Answer 2

wow, that is very good! great job!

Answer 3

i lovee ur poemm you should publishh it < 3 .

Answer 4

thank you guys

Answer 5

Yeah, You should publishh it, look good, keep up the work

Answer 6

Publish it. Its really good!

Answer 7

ii rlly like ur poem!. its rlly good and yu put effort in it yu should publish it

Answer 8

I think you should publish that poem. It has a certain perpesctive of depression that many people can connect with and they can ultimaly feel like their not alone in this world. So yes I do think publishing is a good idea and it's a nice poem or depression that is. Keep up the good work.<3

Answer 9

Reminds me of me, I think its should be published!

Answer 10

It looks good keep it up!!!

Answer 11

Publish it

Answer 12

yes publish it !!

Answer 13

publish it, so that the whole world can read it