Question

hey y'all I wrote a song of my own and need your opinions on it, here are the lyrics on my reply which will be the first one

Answer 1

ok

Answer 2

Farewell in Silver Sorrow
(Verse 1)
In the realm of our intertwined souls
Memories crash, like a broken raft of lost hope
You were the puppeteer, playing me like a show
But now the curtains close, it's time to let go

(Pre-Chorus)
I'm drowning, suffocating, in this bittersweet symphony
You were the devil in my heart, but I fell for your blasphemy
Now I'm left with scars, a tragic masterpiece
Trying to find solace, but all I find is agony

(Chorus)
Farewell in silver sorrow, our love's no longer breathing
A shattered glass of dreams, a requiem that's deceiving
I'll dance alone in the house of memories
Haunted by the echo of your love's tragedies

(Verse 2)
Your touch turned cold, your words a venomous sting
I was singing love songs, while you were pulling the strings
The city of fallen stars witnessed our love's demise
Now I wander in shadows, searching for reprise

(Bridge)
Behind these closed doors, I'm a prisoner of my own heart
Yearning for a symphony that once set us apart
But the walls keep whispering your name, a haunting lullaby
I'm held captive by the beauty of a love that's died

(Chorus)
Farewell in silver sorrow, our love's no longer breathing
A shattered glass of dreams, a requiem that's deceiving
I'll dance alone in the house of memories
Haunted by the echo of your love's tragedies

(Chorus)
Farewell in silver sorrow, our love's no longer breathing
A shattered glass of dreams, a requiem that's deceiving
I'll dance alone in the house of memories
Haunted by the echo of your love's tragedies

(Outro)
In this house of memories, I find solace in my pain
Stolen kisses, shattered promises, haunting me like a stain
But I'll keep dancing in this melancholic ballet
In the silver sorrow, I'll find my way.

Answer 3

Thats nice

Answer 4

thanks! as of now I'm just a smalltime lyrics composer but once I learn to sing and all I'm hoping to actually sing this stuff

Answer 5

But its ai generated sadly sigh

Answer 6

but it's still a song that hasn't been made yet so if I do end up singing it and all it wouldn't be copyright or anything

Answer 7

its good but its not your own 😭

Answer 8

ooh so nice its close to house of memories im so amazed

Answer 9

I did put into the generator to style it after house of memories, I just put a topic of the song and what song or artist to style it after and it does the work

Answer 10

and by the song icanimagine u singing it so goood

Answer 11

but keep up the great work

Answer 12

thanks!

Answer 13

yw

Answer 14

oh also can yall help me with something

Answer 15

by the way, since I have also said an AI made them I just told it the topic and who to style it after, here's the site I use

https://boredhumans.com/lyrics_generator.php

Answer 16

can u help me with some 10th grade biology it is called "I need help with a lab"

Answer 17

I looked and I honestly don't know the answers, I haven't had that lab before

Answer 18

it's alright!! just saying I did try to help you out with that

Answer 19

But its nice tho dawg!

Answer 20

thanks!

Answer 21

oh also can u make one of ur own

Answer 22

it looks good but it me think of house of memories, keep it up and make em good

Answer 23

Bro fr y'all cant be saying "Oh ThIs Is So GoOd, KeEp Up ThE nIcE wOrK" when this mf literally used an AI LYRIC GENERATOR AND SAID THEY WROTE IT

Answer 24

STOP ACCEPTING PRAISE FOR SOMETHING YOU DIDNT EVEN DO

Answer 25

Hey. This is good. Keep up the good work!}