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Here is a story I'm making let me know what y'all think

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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1IyxGxvDVduxE9xJryPaQq1RtYUsX4otXcEobnidOOKQ/edit

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@xxtoxiccharmxx, @hawkcobrakai

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@laya24

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@oliver69

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sorry about it's name I didn't know what to puted

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@kagura

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@rose12345

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@dolphan

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@5starfab

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i'm busy

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cant access

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hmmm

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@uknownprttyfacekayla

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@snowie

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@badgirllaylith

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im to tired to read, pls summerize

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Could u make the doc public can't read it bro

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?

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odd

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noice

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Can you like not @ me into this please?

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love it

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didnt read it

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nice

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the fact u didnt mention me in this grandchild-

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i really forgot

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It says acess is denied, so I cant read it

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This is the prophecy of 4 sirens, one female and 3 males.
One was born just as a normal siren but got changed into a wolf siren.
The 3 males are brothers. All 4 are named Echo, Haloes, Flame, and Darkness.
They are born to end the dark war but something happens to them, one of the males falls in love with the female.


Chapter 1 The beginning

It was a cold, dark morning and two children's parents were hunting.
The mother of one looks up at the sky. The mother says, ”Max, get your sister inside now!”
Max looked at his mother and then nodded. He picks up his sister and goes inside.
Max lays his sister down in her bed and says, “It will be alright sis, i’m here.”
The other family was in a fight, and as the oldest of three, Halose had to keep his brothers safe.
Halose starts to think, "Ugh, I wish they would stop fighting for one day; I should stop them, but I don't want to get in trouble, so I'm staying out of it!" Flame looked at his brother and then asked, ”Why do they always fight bubba?” Halose sighs and looks at his baby brother and starts to think again, ”I’m getting them out of here… Even if we have to run away.. They cannot have this toxicity!” Meanwhile, Max looked out the window and saw his mother getting stabbed. He ran over to his sister and picked her up then ran out of their house!
Max hides behind a tree and starts to cry. Max looks at his sister and holds her close to his chest.. He says, ”I’m not letting anybody get you lil sis y-you have a-a prophecy, and i’m not letting anything happen to you. You’re too important…” Years later, Echo wakes up in her cage and sighs, “It was a dream again! I don’t remember my brother or my mother, but one day I'll be out of this prison!” she says. She hears a door open. “Oh, no, I have to hide!” she says. The scientist walks into the room and says ”Echo, Dear, where are you?’’ He hears her moving around. He says, ”I hear you, Dear.. You cannot hide from me!’’ He walks to where she is hiding and pulls her out. She growls, ”Let me go, you son of!..” He says “Shush, Dear.” He puts her harness on her and holds her down!

Chapter 2 The talk with Halose

Halose looks up at the sky as Flame walks up to him. He says” brother we need to talk.” Halose looked at his brother and asked. ”About what?” Flame sighs,and says ”It’s about Darkness..His power is getting stronger and he doesn't know how to control it… What should we do?’’ Halose starts to think, Hmmm.. Okay, here's the thing: we'll teach him how to control his power!” He says.

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here i know why no one can get in it

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i have to fix it

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It's good so far though so I think it will be a good base for whatever you decide to do with it

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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1p6a9hBGWbDRY0YF9f7ROoLnmVnEzdWVE7-rAmFFEbEk/edit check mine out midnight

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I wish I could read

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good story

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me personally think you should add more to it

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nb

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its good cuz

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It looks good Mid keep it up