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Midnight97:

I made some edits I hope y'all like them ❤

Midnight97:

@thekaylahope @laya24 @snowie @oliver69 @uknownprttyfacekayla @chuckthedonut @dolphan @karissafrazier @r3b3lmarine

uknownprttyfacekayla:

W i love em

Midnight97:

@uknownprttyfacekayla wrote:
W i love em
Thanks cuz

Midnight97:

Here I'll put it in here so y'all can read it

Midnight97:

The Sirens’ Prophecy This is the prophecy of 4 sirens, one female and 3 males. One was born just as a normal siren but got changed into a wolf siren. The 3 males are brothers. All 4 are named Echo, Haloes, Flame, and Darkness. They are born to end the dark war but something happens to them, one of the males falls in love with the female. Chapter 1: The Beginning It was a cold, dark morning. Two children's parents were hunting. The mother of one looks up at the sky. The mother says, ”Max, get your sister inside now!” Max looked at his mother and nodded. He picks up his sister and goes inside. He lays his sister down in her bed and says, “It will be alright sis, i’m here.” The other family was in a fight, and as the oldest of three, Halose had to keep his brothers safe. Halose starts to think, "Ugh, I wish they would stop fighting for one day. I should stop them, but I don't want to get in trouble. I'm staying out of it!" Flame looked at his brother and asked, ”Why do they always fight bubba?” Halose sighs and looks at his baby brother and starts to think again, ”I’m getting them out of here, even if we have to run away. They cannot have this toxicity!” Meanwhile, Max looked out the window and saw his mother getting stabbed. He ran over to his sister, picked her up, and ran out of the house! Max hides behind a tree and starts to cry. He looks at his sister and holds her close to his chest. He says, ”I’m not letting anybody get you, Lil Sis. Y-you have a-a prophecy, and I’m not letting anything happen to you. You’re too important…” Years later, Echo wakes up in her cage and sighs. “It was a dream again! I don’t remember my brother or my mother, but one day I'll be out of this prison!” She hears a door open. “Oh no, I have to hide!” The scientist walks into the room and says ”Echo, Dear, where are you?’’ He hears her moving around. He says, ”I hear you, Dear.. You cannot hide from me!’’ He walks to where she is hiding and pulls her out. She growls, ”Let me go, you son of!..” He says “Shush, Dear.” He puts her harness on her and holds her down!

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Chapter 2: The Talk With Halose Halose looks up at the sky as Flame walks up to him. He says, ”Brother, we need to talk.” Halose looked at his brother and asked, ”About what?” Flame sighs and says, ”It’s about Darkness.. his power is getting stronger and he doesn't know how to control it… What should we do?’’ Halose starts to think, ”Hmmm.. Okay, here's the thing: we'll teach him how to control his power!” He says. They heard a scream and ran to see what was happening. They stop seeing flames around Darkness. Halose looked at his baby brother trapped in the flames. He looked at Flame and asked, “What do we do.. I cannot touch fire.. Maybe you could get him?” Flame shook his head and said, “Yes, your highness! What else should I do when I am grabbing our brother?” Halose sighed and said, ”Just get him!” Flame rolled his eyes, walked through the fire, and grabbed Darkness. Flame shook his head at Darkness and said, “You dummy,” and sighs, "you really need to learn how to control your power!” Darkness sighed and asked, ”Can you stop being a jerk for once? Like, come on! I don’t know my power!”

snowie:

Noice, i like it

Midnight97:

@kagura

Midnight97:

@snowie wrote:
Noice, i like it
Happy you do❤

Midnight97:

@luigi0210

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@rose12345

Midnight97:

Chapter 3: The Escape. Echo wakes up and grabs her neck, and cries, “ What the hell happened to my neck!” She looks around and sees the scientist asleep next to her “What the?” She says, the scientist starts to wake up. She moves back from him but he grabs her leg. She kicks him and gets up and she sees his keys and smiles. She grabs the keys and runs to the door and then unlocked the door, and runs out of the room. She starts to think, “Hmm, Where to go Ahuh got it!” She runs to the exit door and walks out. She says, “ FREEDOM!!”

rose12345:

from what i read i like it, its really good, keep up the good work

Midnight97:

@rose12345 wrote:
from what i read i like it, its really good, keep up the good work
Thank you

rose12345:

@midnight97 wrote:
@rose12345 wrote:
from what i read i like it, its really good, keep up the good work
Thank you
anytime

Stringcheese272:

I like it great job :>

Midnight97:

@5starfab

5StarFab:

I have nothing to nice say about this.

Midnight97:

@5starfab wrote:
I have nothing to nice say about this.
Why? What's wrong with it!?

karissafrazier:

@5starfab wrote:
I have nothing to nice say about this.
looks like blood will be running today

chuckthedonut:

omg this is amazing ! like ur other work u do !! ur so talented, amazing job !! <3

Midnight97:

@chuckthedonut wrote:
omg this is amazing ! like ur other work u do !! ur so talented, amazing job !! <3
Thank you

Treeko:

Great

chuckthedonut:

@midnight97 wrote:
@chuckthedonut wrote:
omg this is amazing ! like ur other work u do !! ur so talented, amazing job !! <3
Thank you
you're welcomeeee !!

5StarFab:

@karissafrazier wrote:
@5starfab wrote:
I have nothing to nice say about this.
looks like blood will be running today
From what?

karissafrazier:

@5starfab wrote:
@karissafrazier wrote:
@5starfab wrote:
I have nothing to nice say about this.
looks like blood will be running today
From what?
u

5StarFab:

@karissafrazier wrote:
@5starfab wrote:
@karissafrazier wrote:
@5starfab wrote:
I have nothing to nice say about this.
looks like blood will be running today
From what?
u
I told her why i didn't like it.And funny how fun will be running from me you and you're e threats

5StarFab:

you upset cause i spoke the truth?

5StarFab:

Want to cry about it?

5StarFab:

i can get you help cause you clearly need it coming at me behind the screen bfr

5StarFab:

And do you think i want to read book about people being locked up in a cage that's some type weird crap and i ain't reading that.could said woke up in a random room not a damn cage.

5StarFab:

So you still going to come at me for speaking freely?

5StarFab:

She tagged me and i told her i had nothing nice to say no harm done.I'm not doing anything wrong just speaking the truth and if you can't handle it then sdfu

5StarFab:

@luhivqqcherry

luhivqqcherry:

whats going on

5StarFab:

scroll up and read

5StarFab:

dude this pfps are making me smile

luhivqqcherry:

oh

luhivqqcherry:

hehe

5StarFab:

Dude ima make a fabian clan on my friends site byeeee

Midnight97:

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Midnight97:

@karissafrazier wrote:
@5starfab wrote:
I have nothing to nice say about this.
looks like blood will be running today
Thank you for trying to help

Midnight97:

But it's fine and I bet he hasn't even read what I am doing

Midnight97:

So no more fights happen again I'm not going to tag him again

5StarFab:

@midnight97 wrote:
@karissafrazier wrote:
@5starfab wrote:
I have nothing to nice say about this.
looks like blood will be running today
Thank you for trying to help
Threatening people is not helping df

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