Question

Hi guys I was wondering if you could help me out here. So I submitted an argumentized essay on Fossil Fuels a few days ago to my English Teacher and I got this feedback from her.
"First of all, fix all of the formatting issues. You also have a lot of work to do on citation within your essay. Some of what you wrote seems to come from outside sources, but is not cited. It seems like it was pieced together from a variety of sources but without citation and without enough of your own voice to tie ideas and sources together. "
Can you help me?
Here's the doc: https://wilkescc-my.sharepoint.com/:w:/g/personal/drgreer249_students_wilkescc_edu/ESF9UZ36FGlIvRcF83GrD_oBU0BAIFEex4kPM0_7DqS1UQ?e=FTE4ae

Answer 1

Okay so like... I am the essay god.

Answer 2

i would help but i can not access the document. I am sorry

Answer 3

Global warming is an ongoing concern for many. Every year, fossil fuels release a staggering 35 billion metric tons of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere, pushing the planet closer to the brink of environmental disaster (MT Climate Portal)

Answer 4

Is this coming from a source, this whole part?

Answer 5

(“Report Provides Most Recent Evidence of Climate Change”) this is incorrect, format is: (Author, Paragraph #)

Answer 6

Fix that and the others, then we can move into the next step.

Answer 7

Also you should change that people can edit it, that will screw you over yk.

Answer 8

Let me know once you have taken those steps and I will help you with the next part.

Answer 9

Tell them how fossil fuels is dangerous and make the first paragraph about the effect and how it affects the climate

Answer 10

https://wilkescc-my.sharepoint.com/:w:/g/personal/drgreer249_students_wilkescc_edu/ESF9UZ36FGlIvRcF83GrD_oBU0BAIFEex4kPM0_7DqS1UQ?e=BkDkEg
I fixed it to where you can edit

Answer 11

i cand understand a thing, also where did the monkey and mnms come from?

Answer 12

W speccy

Answer 13

Yep :>