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OLIVER69:

I've made another poem and I'm stuck on a good name for it. Feedback and name suggestions are welcome...

OLIVER69:

In fields of green, where wildflowers sway, I'll have you on your back, come what may. Your eyes like stars, shining bright and gay, Our love will dance, in endless play. With every step, our hearts entwined, Together we'll roam, side by side. The world may spin, but we'll always find, Our love, like magic, intertwined. In dreams so sweet, we'll lose ourselves, Where only we exist, no else. Our lips, a whisper away from bliss, Forever locked, in endless kiss. So let us wander, hand in hand, And cherish each moment, as they stand. For in this love, we'll find our land, A place where we can forever stand.

HotPockets14:

I love it

Midnight97:

It looks good but I have no ideal for a name

xcoledd1:

i think i have a name

xcoledd1:

how about "Meadow"

Midnight97:

Dad I am sorry that I don't have a name

OLIVER69:

You helped me come up with a title, meadow is a bit plain, but thanks to you I got a better name, "Sweetened Paddock". And that's okay sweetie...

BexleyBrooks:

I like it

AstroBoy:

Amazing.

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