Question

I am a poet writing of my pain.

I am a person living life if shame.

I am your son hiding my depression.

I am your bother trying to make a good impression.

I am your friend acting like I’m fine.

I am a wisher wishing this life weren’t mine.

I am a boy who thinks of suicide.

I am a teenager pushing his tears aside.

I am a student who doesn’t have a clue.

I am a boy sitting next to you.

I am the one asking you to care.

I am your best friend hoping you’ll be there.

Answer 1

@graysonunderwoods I like it man

Answer 2

this poem is deep, but it's meaningful , I like it a lot you can make it as a future poet ♡ .

Answer 3

i dont think so but thank u for beliving in me

Answer 4

.

Answer 5

@graysonunderwoods well I'm glad I could help. you have talent man. I cant write a good poem to save my life

Answer 6

@manny300303199 your cool man,it just comes tou,you never think about it,it just flows in

Answer 7

@graysonunderwoods I don't have that talent man. my talent is shooting clay pigeons out of the sky. so far it takes people about a year of practice to be where I'm at. but I've managed to do it in 3 months

Answer 8

exactly your more talented than you think @manny300303199

Answer 9

actually decent poem on question cove? didn't think it was possible until now, good job.

Answer 10

@xxchudlord420xx lol

Answer 11

Just wow. I am speechless. I can feel the pain and tension in this, if you ever need someone, I'll be here, just dm me. Thank you for sharing this ♡♡

Answer 12

nice

Answer 13

Are you a parking ticket? ‘Cause you’ve got ‘fine’ written all over you.

Answer 14

jk

Answer 15

lol

Answer 16

beautiful inspiring poem.

Answer 17

I like it

Answer 18

This is amazing, you're gonna be an amazing writer in the future.

Answer 19

Whoa it is amazing

Answer 20

This is good- It hits heard fr

Answer 21

In the depths of sorrow, my heart does weep,
Aching with pain, emotions running deep.
Through tear-stained eyes, I see a world so gray,
Where joy once lived, now fades away.

Lost in the darkness, I search for light,
But all I find are shadows in the night.
Grief consumes me, like a relentless tide,
Leaving me broken, with nowhere to hide.

Memories haunt me, like ghosts from the past,
Reminding me of love that couldn't last.
Each tear that falls, a silent plea,
For solace and peace to set me free.

But in this sadness, I find strength anew,
To embrace the pain and see it through.
For even in sorrow, there's beauty to find,
A glimmer of hope, a love that's kind.

So let the tears flow, let the emotions rise,
For through the sadness, we learn to empathize.
And in the depths of despair, we'll find our way,
To a brighter tomorrow, where happiness holds sway.

Answer 22

i like

Answer 23

I LOVE IT

Answer 24

wrecks of soy l ma ao

Answer 25

also you kinda did when you posted this here

you posting this implies you want opinions on the poem

Answer 26

why would you post it here then
@graysonunderwoods

Answer 27

@xxchudlord420xx can you stop spamming

Answer 28

AMAZING

Answer 29

Type shi. But I felt this.

Answer 30

ong this good, lowkey imma steal this cause it's that good(jp but gj)

Answer 31

poetic

Answer 32

W gray

Answer 33

Great job!