Question

im about to write a song in ten mintutes lets go

when i die
i wonder
i wonder when
wonder when i will
when i die
will it
really matterrr
my brains gets cloudy
and i cant think
love burns
but all fires die
then what do i say yea
what do i doo
whats it all worth
if all has to endd
thats why i wonderrr
why i wonder
i just sit and ponderr
me and my problems
i know that theyll never end
so over the edge
i fall
again
again and again
most time i dontt evennn care
cuz what can i do nobody if cares that that im there or there or any where
does it really make a difference
so i wonder yeaa i wonder and i worry
about all things i cant controll and sad thing is yea the sad is id do all again again and cry
rearagne my brain buts all the same
so what i can dooo
if its all true
its all coming down
im so tired just so tired of being the clown beinng the villain of own story
its tearing
its tearing mee
apartttt
so i wonder if this is last day
would i really care
as long their happy
id die a million times (it was more like 12mins)

Answer 1

I like itt you did an awesome job keep it up 👏🏽❤️

Answer 2

tht was trash

Answer 3

It's pretty good ngl

Answer 4

awsome

Answer 5

Could be better.

Answer 6

ZeroEmotions your brain could work even better

Answer 7

It wasn't bad, but it wasn't the best.

Answer 8

not even one of the best but wasnt bad

Answer 9

Honestly it seemed like you put your thoughts on paper I love it

Answer 10

It’s cool

Answer 11

Yb better

Answer 12

cool

Answer 13

I don’t like it tbh it could’ve been better

Answer 14

omg that tilent it takes me a week to make one

Answer 15

Work On capitxaltion and spelling :>

Answer 16

@Sydneyxisxhim speakin faxs

Answer 17

W

Answer 18

nice song

Answer 19

nice

Answer 20

You could also work on this on a piece of paper then start performing it on your device so you know it makes sense/goes to together, I'm working on a song and it's on a similar topic of this. It can do little better like you can repeat thing but make it to where it makes more sense or go together. If you need help I can help you I am pretty good at putting together songs/lyrics