tell me what yall think pweas i wrote this yesterday still a work in progress

Better not touch

I feel a burning desire, deep inside my soul
A love that's uncontrollable, I can't seem to let go
But your touch, oh it's dangerous, like a burning flame
I long to feel your skin, but I know it's not the same

I wanna touch you, but I better not touch your poison, oh no
Your love is sweet temptation, but it's a risk I can't afford
I'm caught in this addiction, a love that's bittersweet
I wanna hold you close, but your poison's got a hold on me

You bring a touch of heaven, wrapped up in disguise
But your love's a double-edged sword, it cuts me through the lies
I'm drawn to your touch, like a moth to the flame

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tell me what yall think pweas  i wrote this yesterday still a work in progress

Better not touch

I feel a burning desire, deep inside my soul
A love that's uncontrollable, I can't seem to let go
But your touch, oh it's dangerous, like a burning flame
I long to feel your skin, but I know it's not the same

I wanna touch you, but I better not touch your poison, oh no
Your love is sweet temptation, but it's a risk I can't afford
I'm caught in this addiction, a love that's bittersweet
I wanna hold you close, but your poison's got a hold on me

You bring a touch of heaven, wrapped up in disguise
But your love's a double-edged sword, it cuts me through the lies
I'm drawn to your touch, like a moth to the flame

Badgirllaylith · Answer

It’s a vibe

TinydinoUwU · Answer

@badgirllaylith wrote:

It’s a vibe

thanks much love

Badgirllaylith · Answer

@tinydinouwu wrote:

@badgirllaylith wrote:

It’s a vibe

thanks much love

Much love

xcoledd1 · Answer

ohh pretty cool

TinydinoUwU · Answer

@xcoledd1 wrote:

ohh pretty cool

thank u

snowie · Answer

it's amazing