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Coyote:

Is this Love?: By @Coyote

Coyote:

I wrote this poem for a girl I really like in my school.

Coyote:

What's this feeling? My stomach feels funny. My heart beats faster. The world becomes a blur, and all I can see is her? Is this love? She brightens up my day, Just by saying "Hey." She's so kind, People like her are hard to find. Her personality is so warm, Lots of happiness begins to form. Is this love? I look forward to see her every day, I think of her a lot when we're away. She's so pretty and perfect to me, There's no other girl I can think of like she. When I'm with her everything is so bright, Because she is my bright and beautiful light. The heavens open and shine from above. What is this feeling? I believe it is love.

Milawillalwaysbecool:

i think its love omg

Coyote:

What do you guys think?

Milawillalwaysbecool:

I think u have more talent than me

LindseyMarti:

this is tru bro

OLIVER69:

I think this is pretty good. There;'s no doubt it's love. It's kind of obvious, plus if you write a poem for someone just proves more that you love them. So, yeah it's love, and this poem is the sweetest. Good Work ^^

xcoledd1:

u did good *thumbs up*

xcoledd1:

hope u get that girl

Illuminous:

Its not love, it's lust :>

Illuminous:

Bye bye.

Wankle1222:

I love you spec my nuts throb for you

CosmoIsHere:

@coyote wrote:
What's this feeling? My stomach feels funny. bro this song is rizz My heart beats faster. The world becomes a blur, and all I can see is her? Is this love? She brightens up my day, Just by saying "Hey." She's so kind, People like her are hard to find. Her personality is so warm, Lots of happiness begins to form. Is this love? I look forward to see her every day, I think of her a lot when we're away. She's so pretty and perfect to me, There's no other girl I can think of like she. When I'm with her everything is so bright, Because she is my bright and beautiful light. The heavens open and shine from above. What is this feeling? I believe it is love.

CosmoIsHere:

rizz ong

xcoledd1:

u did good better then me for poetry

khloikamren0117:

@wankle1222 wrote:
I love you spec my nuts throb for you
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TamataBatata2345:

no it iisn't its called faliure

Midnight97:

It is amazing just because it comes from the heart, keep it up

NEFFEX:

W

ShadowKid3:

I like the rhythm and tone of the poem, very nice very nice.

1Dismyeverything:

i really hope you get that girl

WalterWhite:

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Treeko:

ask her out!

5172319:

oooo thats good !

Coyote:

@treeko wrote:
ask her out!
I asked her out today. She said she loved the poem and gave me a hug. I dunno if we're dating or anything but I'm still happy. (:

Treeko:

@coyote wrote:
@treeko wrote:
ask her out!
I asked her out today. She said she loved the poem and gave me a hug. I dunno if we're dating or anything but I'm still happy. (:
YAYY!!! Hopefully, yall are. Im glad she liked it, you did put your heart and soul in it.

doggofroyo:

I love love

AcornTheNut:

my stomach feel funny too

snowie:

Noice 10/10

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